 secretaryofsillywalks 2008-07-20 . chapter 1I really like this story. I love the fact that it's from Alice's perspective in the hospital - I don't think I've read a fic like that before. My biggest problem was that it was a bit confusing to read. I'm going to chalk it up to the fact that Alice is insane so, naturally, her thoughts wouldn't make much sense...
oh! almost forgot... spaces before all dashes! It should look like - this , not like- this. :)
once again, I thought this story was great! |