This is really good! Please continue, I'd love to read more!

Great job. :)

YAY! Lily and Severus FOREVER!

James doesn't deserve her...

JA

CHEESY. But cute.

If you do decide to continue, I would make Snape slightly less fluffy... although after reading DH I am absolutely in TOTAL LOVE with Snape (and planning to FINALLY write some new fics).. I don't believe he was ever that kind.

I'll add you to my alerts in case you decide to continue. I'd like to see where you want to take this.

Sweet, really wish that Lily forgave him.

pls continue. It's really good.

Oh my lord, this was one of the most ADORABLE little one shots i've ever read.

I'm an absolute sucker for Lily/Snape, i LOVE the pairing to BITS, and this story does more than do it justice. I'd love it if you continued, but you don't have to if you think it'll mess up what you have already ( i know the feeling). I'd love to see more stuff from you.

Good beginning of an AU - please, go on, it would be worth it - I am certain. (-: I really hate the idea that she was the one to send him off to Voldemort by her words - but I suppose you could change that. Would be nice. (-:

Oh, you HAVE to continue. Really. :)

Good way to bring them together again :)

This is how it should have happened in the book XD great work so far, I hope you continue!

I love this so far, you must write more. Please. ^_~

*purr* Marauder-era Lily/Sev action. Yummy.

This could easily stay a one-shot, but it could also become a great AU. Maybe you could post as both? Would that be allowed? *ponder*

Oh, I hope you do continue, I love it!

I would love to see how this small interaction changed things between them in the future.

You should write more.