 Jyenna 2008-07-06 . chapter 1 Gods. One year after reading this, and it's still my favourite fanfic ever. ._. I seriously started bawling at the end of it. >> NoI'mnotsleepdeprivedshush?
You write the characters perfectly. No OOC, no rushing... And ohmigawsh, the -atmosphere-. I just wish I had your skills. D: |
 Flip side of coin 2007-12-22 . chapter 1After reading this I have to say, that it was one rather sad story. I felt empty during episode 25 and volume 7, but you just completed that feeling with your fic. .__. Apathetic mood, I have to say. But damn, did you write this nicely. Raito's mind's slow breaking, for example. Raito talking to walls, believing it was his equal, the man he had killed, just points that out. Nicely done short story, even if it wasn't the best ones here are, this is of fanfics I actually remember to look up again. -shooks head- Probably it's because of the three last lines, I liked this. :) Faved. |
 Cantare 2007-12-16 . chapter 1Very very interesting take on post ch58 Light. After that chapter the series went way downhill in my opinion. It would have been awesome if L had still been around in spirit at least, like in this story. Nice concept. |
 MeEksiNs 2007-11-30 . chapter 1well - if the fic is not confusing i dont know what is but it was interesting though. |
 Kid9535 2007-10-05 . chapter 1A few words, confused, amused and defused yes, defused...I was about to explode from exams. This was very good :P Now I must go and kill myself. Because I am going to fail history very very very very very soon. Sometimes I talk to walls. |
 Yuna Aoki 2007-10-04 . chapter 1Perfect. If L could talk to Light after death, the conversation would be like that, I'm sure. I LOVE the last question of Light and L's answer. That was so sad T_T I love this fanfic.
Favourite >3 |
 judi42 2007-09-23 . chapter 1This story is beautiful, really is very IC, Raito and Ryuuzaki are pefect in your wrtitten.
PS: I wish translate your story into spanish -my idiom nativ- please! |
 Ceirwy 2007-08-06 . chapter 1Beautifull gripping sweet sad and funny. What a mix you managed. I love it and am very glad you DID decide to post it. It's going straight to me favs. |
 phoenix of hell 2007-08-06 . chapter 1I'm glad you decided to post it, it is very good. The conversation is very much like something I would imagine between them. And the fact that Light is talking to a ghost-L is an added bonus. |
 Ryuzaki's Kitten 2007-08-05 . chapter 1I like this. Very good. ^_^ |
 Anahi 2007-08-05 . chapter 1 this story is amazing i luv it! although i wish you wrote a second chapter i think that this story is perfect! |
 Souvenir 2007-08-05 . chapter 1Possible the best piece of Death Note fanfiction I have ever read.
And I've read more than I care to admit. This was brilliance, this was creativity, this was taking canon and fulfilling what fanfiction should be like.
So in conclusion, I guess what I'm saying is that you write amazingly well, and you have got a lovely story here. |
 Elisabetta Avalone 2007-08-05 . chapter 1This was awesome! I loved that you hint at Light losing his mind and having a conversation with L was only appropriate. ^^
The last couple of lines were probably my favorite, they made the story seem deeper. Very well done, though I can't help but wish it had been longer. :)
-Sky |
 Eka-chan 2007-08-04 . chapter 1 Weird...but thoroughly amusing nonetheless... |
 Kirah Ruth 2007-08-04 . chapter 1You're brilliant, in a twisted sort of way.
But still... walls don't speak.
Ah well. |