This is beautiful. I love the formatting for the incorporated poetry, too-- much easier to read than every quote being its own line.

sweet.

As usual, this was beautiful. I can't understand that it's only had 3 reviews so far, and I feel as if I need to correct that. Amazing idea, well written, sensational.

This was very beautiful. I really like reading something different. I hope you continue with your writing, you are very talented.

Well, I thought it was rather good.
I loved the irony of (stanza?) I, and I liked the way you ended. I'm a sucker for good endings!

Damn. Why doesn't think have any reviews?! It's brilliant. I love it. I'm beginning to see that I love all of your Twilight stuff. The way you write...it's so different to everything else. Very refreshing, and incredibly addicting. :D You're defintely going on my favourite authors list...and alerts, for that matter. :)