I thought it was good, but a little short and confusing. In the end, I did get what you were saying.

well done. cant wait for an update

I NEED MORE CHAPTERS! PLEASE UPDATE WHEN U CAN! THANX!

well this is a very well written story and i am very interested so far =)

wow I love this chapter too, very interesting. ^^b

And waited.

And waited.

And waited.

And then she heard it……

The soft snores of the slumbering Charming Amethyst.

haha I LOVE IT so cute. ^_^b

Shizuru...mysterious as always.

I know! I know! Shizuru is pregnant!

Shizuru - Kiyohime...

Me : Uh...though...

..I'm not sure how! XD

Gets blasted to pieces by Shizuru's attack...

May I rest in pieces...-_-;

XD!

youve come back from hiding! (im still hiding. lol.) i missed your stories. hmm...im curious as to what happened to shizuru in Florence.

renny-chan

aww, what's up with shizuru? you have to continue.

yes, what happened to shizuru's trip that left her so troubled even in the presence of natsuki? or did it happened even before her trip to florence? did it have something to do with tomoe?

peace!

~(.)-(.)~

it's so sweet when natsuki is worried about shizuru

Intriguing, what's up with Shizuru? It's something that occurs once a year so that kind of narrows it down. She wouldn't be fretting over a birthday like this, at least I wouldn't think so. An anniversary of a death perhaps? But why would it be different this year? Hmm. It certainly has me thinking. Hope to read more soon. :)

there aren't enough Mai Otome fiction centered on Kruger and Viola these days... the world needs more of them
I need more of them..
so sick and tired of hearing about biker girl who's still in school chrushing flowers in the garden... i like the idea of actually giving them some kind of responsability!!
so.. keep going!
ja

ooh cliffy and a secretive shizuru.. nice story here! :)