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Reviews for: Love's Labors Lost
slytherin_gypsy
2009-01-01 . chapter 1
I have tears in my eyes as I finished reading this. I love the idea that Naruto was a fragile baby and that what could be perceived as a heavy burden actually saved his life. Thank you for sharing such a lovely story.
fang shinobi
2008-12-26 . chapter 1
So sad yet so awesome... please do not be alarmed by the number of reviews I have posted on your fics for the last hour or so... I couldn't find anything to read hehe...

Awesome work! Keep up the job well done and gambare!
Psycho Lullaby
2008-09-09 . chapter 1
You need more reviews for this story!

This is a beautiful piece of writing, and I will admit, it brought tears to my eyes. Minato's love for his village, his love for Kushina, his love for Naruto...his sacrifice for all of them is so painfully touching. You did a wonderful job. Thank you for writing and posting this!

Much Love,
Marysia
Selonianth Shinjitsu
2008-01-15 . chapter 1
this is very nice very nice very much like you'd expect from someone who was the father of our own Naruto
InosBane
2007-12-04 . chapter 1
Such a beautiful story. Poor Naruto.
openwindow4
2007-12-03 . chapter 1
omiGOD. this is SPECTACULAR!

i don't think ANYONE has ever thought of this before - all the fans just assumed that you had to be healthy to accommodate the kyuubi - but this- this just BLEW my mind away!

not only is it a spectacular plot twist, it's SO well written - it reflects well on minato, and sort of shows the reader his thinking process - it is absolutely AWESOME. i absolutely LOVED the plot twist (my favorite part, in case you couldn't tell XD) because we all just assume naruto was always strong and such!!

XD

i LOVE this fic! +FAVED!
bubblygoo
2007-11-11 . chapter 1
How tragic, and an interesting twist on the idea of fate. It was a good read.
Folle
2007-09-18 . chapter 1
Very interesting. I expect lots of stories about the Fourth will start popping up now that we know more about him. Well, the first ones will be the best ones anyway... Excellent work.
Mystica83
2007-09-11 . chapter 1
Sugoi! Roundabout the middle of the manga, I came to the conclusion (like most others) that Naruto was Yondaime's son and that his mother died in childbirth. But you've really brought to life the significance of that sacrifice, not just for Yondaime and the village, but for Naruto himself, which is what makes this story stand out all the more. Excellent work!
nothingtodo
2007-09-03 . chapter 1
BEAUTIFUL. Best explanation for how he could do it to his son that I've found so far.
Jibril's Avatar
2007-08-27 . chapter 1
Whoa that was powerful. Just the right length too, nice insight into what the 4th Hokage was thinking when Kyuubi struck. Nice job!
Tsubomi
2007-08-05 . chapter 1
It's awesome! O.O"

I am not really able to say anything except for: WOW!
The story pulls it's reader directly into the Naruto-
Universe... and due to your perfect writing style,
the reader is not able to let go for only one second!

I love your fanfictions!
~~ Tsubomi, german singer and Temari cosplayer
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