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Jazz
2008-04-19
ch 2, anon.
abuseDang! good job! u r such a good writer! i luv this story! write a long chapter
ThatyDel
2008-03-09
ch 2,
abuseContinues, please!
ThatyDel
2008-03-08
ch 1,
abusePlease, post more!! i really love it!
TotalyBookworm
2008-01-24
ch 2,
abuseOMG! I lOVE ur story Pls do keep going! Hey how do you put out a story I do't know how to please help me.
Anyway How bout them kissing underwater plus a part from someone elses view of the couple
-Insert-Smiley-Face-
2008-01-05
ch 1,
abuseThis is SO cute! I love Leif/Jasmine! Its such a sweet story. You should continue! PLEASE?
nadia the demented one
2008-01-03
ch 2,
abuseYou have a few spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes. Simple proof reading will help.
Ardith
2007-12-18
ch 2, anon.
abuseI like this story, and I would like to see where you go with it. I like the romance (it's not too sappy) and Lief's mental battle with his conscience and his feelings for Jasmine.
tiffany
2007-12-08
ch 2, anon.
abuseit was a good story
dude 42
2007-12-05
ch 2, anon.
abuseI thought it was great story that was missing an ending. PLEASE WRITE MORE!
summoner yuna ffx
2007-10-11
ch 2, anon.
abusethis fanfic is awsome. there are a few spelling errors though.
sunlightdust
2007-10-06
ch 2,
abuseThis is so sweet! You're really great at writing LiefxJasmine. Keep it up!
Pharaoh'sJewel
2007-09-24
ch 2,
abusegah i love it... :)
Pharaoh'sJewel
2007-09-24
ch 1,
abuseomg i LOVE THIS. one thing i didn't like about deltora quest is that they didn't elaborate on their relationship. this is so cute i love it! only thing tho: try fixing up your grammar a little...its kinda distracting. but other than that, i love it! :)
pinkhippo8888
2007-09-14
ch 2,
abuseThat is excellent! I'm mostly a Harry Potter fan myself but that was great! Keep writing!
Demosthaeanes
2007-09-10
ch 2,
abuseThanks for updating! I LOVE LiefxJasmine stuff! GOOD JOB! :D We need more of this!
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