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| Jazz 2008-04-19 ch 2, anon. | abuseDang! good job! u r such a good writer! i luv this story! write a long chapter |
| ThatyDel 2008-03-09 ch 2,  | abuseContinues, please! |
| ThatyDel 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abusePlease, post more!! i really love it! |
| TotalyBookworm 2008-01-24 ch 2, | abuseOMG! I lOVE ur story Pls do keep going! Hey how do you put out a story I do't know how to please help me. Anyway How bout them kissing underwater plus a part from someone elses view of the couple |
| -Insert-Smiley-Face- 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abuseThis is SO cute! I love Leif/Jasmine! Its such a sweet story. You should continue! PLEASE? |
| nadia the demented one 2008-01-03 ch 2, | abuseYou have a few spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes. Simple proof reading will help. |
| Ardith 2007-12-18 ch 2, anon. | abuseI like this story, and I would like to see where you go with it. I like the romance (it's not too sappy) and Lief's mental battle with his conscience and his feelings for Jasmine. |
| tiffany 2007-12-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseit was a good story |
| dude 42 2007-12-05 ch 2, anon. | abuseI thought it was great story that was missing an ending. PLEASE WRITE MORE! |
| summoner yuna ffx 2007-10-11 ch 2, anon. | abusethis fanfic is awsome. there are a few spelling errors though. |
| sunlightdust 2007-10-06 ch 2, | abuseThis is so sweet! You're really great at writing LiefxJasmine. Keep it up! |
| Pharaoh'sJewel 2007-09-24 ch 2, | abusegah i love it... :) |
| Pharaoh'sJewel 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuseomg i LOVE THIS. one thing i didn't like about deltora quest is that they didn't elaborate on their relationship. this is so cute i love it! only thing tho: try fixing up your grammar a little...its kinda distracting. but other than that, i love it! :) |
| pinkhippo8888 2007-09-14 ch 2, | abuseThat is excellent! I'm mostly a Harry Potter fan myself but that was great! Keep writing! |
| Demosthaeanes 2007-09-10 ch 2, | abuseThanks for updating! I LOVE LiefxJasmine stuff! GOOD JOB! :D We need more of this! |