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| DetBarb 2008-02-08 ch 4, anon. | abuseAnother rivetting chapt. What a pity that Sam is pulling rank on him again. I think that Phil is solo ing again is also because of his annoyance/hurt re being broken up with. Wish she could see she wrong. |
| DetBarb 2008-02-08 ch 3, anon. | abuseVery interesting chapt. I forgot to mention ch 2 Im glad that she acknowledges that she is still in love with him. Excellent. Here Im glad to see that she realises that time away from Phil hasnt worked. Also excellent. I love how her thoughts are moving from her arrival back at the nick on her return and she sees Stu. Not at all happy to see him. Also excellent. I love that when she first sees Phil she realises that she is totally screwed - that being away definately hasnt worked. I hope that she eventually realises/decides that she is wrong about her decision to break up with Phil. |
| DetBarb 2008-02-08 ch 2, anon. | abuseBrilliant 2nd chapt.!! Im glad that Sam is still questioning her decision to break up with Phil. All she has to do is to perhaps talk to Jo and or Gina - maybe even Terry. Someone who will get her to discuss her feelings for the past 5 years, and where she is now, and get her to change her mind and get back with him. Yes Sam needs Phil. He's not any man, he's her soul mate and she really shouldve given him more of a chance to prove his love/fidelity. Another fantastic fic Laura! |
| DetBarb 2008-02-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseAnother excellent fic Laura. I like how you've organised the layout for this story - the way her thoughts are taking her from the time she broke up with Phil to trying to get through the first night without him - and the symbols being the leftover washing up from breakfast being in lots of 2 and because she decided to break up with him she is back to 1 again, then she breaks a cup - symbolising her broken heart. Then the movies on tv. She cant get away from remembering Phil - and his scent is on the pillow still. Then she tries to sleep and all she can see is him. |
| DetBarb 2008-01-25 ch 4, anon. | abuseHi Laura. Just in case you dont know, I have reviewed the others in this series. You really are quite insightful when it comes to Sam. And I always think that you should be an adviser to the writers re her characterisation because you have it down to a T. In fact they should employ you as her head writer - then we Huxons would be very happy. Im looking forward to the next installment. Excellent as always Laura. |
| DetBarb 2008-01-25 ch 3, anon. | abuseOh Laura you really should be a scriptwriter or at the least an adviser to them on how to write for SamPhil - esp Sam. I love how this is panning out. Excellent. |
| DetBarb 2008-01-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseOh WOW. This is fantastic Laura. i wish she hadnt broken up with him or listened to Stu. She shouldve trusted him more. Romania taught her that she can trust him with her life. |
| DetBarb 2008-01-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is SO excellent Laura. It had me in tears. You really are quite an insightful writer. You really know what makes her tick. |
| DetBarb 2007-12-16 ch 4, anon. | abusewow! This is Sam and Phil obviously (who else...hehehe). This is Sam's thoughts and perspective. This is set from the ep when a figure from Sam's past comes back - ep is set after she became DI. Sam tried to reign Phil in after he went on another solo excursion. Sam pulls rank on Phil. And questions if she can trust him. (she has just put a red flag to a bull after shooting herself in the foot personally/romantically). |
| lil-skating-lindz 2007-12-08 ch 4, | abuseAww that was so good! Extremely well written and very like Sam. You write her thoughts so well:) I tried it once but it turned out a load of rubbish and I never posted it lol:) Plz ud soon love Lynsey x |
| HuXoN 4 EvA 2007-12-06 ch 4, | abuseSleep with him to get things back on track lol, then they'd start a relationship and they would respect and listen to each other, ud soon coz i cant wait to find out how she deals with it, Luv Sam x |
| S-Nixon 2007-12-06 ch 4, | abuseAw that was really sweet!! Really well written too! ud soon. Laura x |
| Huxon270906 2007-12-06 ch 4, | abuseHeya huni! I love it huni, it's amazing. I love this story too, in the sense that it's entirely from Sam's POV and I like that about it because you do write Sam's thought so brillantly (as I discovered when it came to writing our joint fic) not that I didn't realise that before. Neway, I loved that bit at the end too, with Phil's line, ver, very Phil like I thought. Loved it huni, luv ya lots Gemz x x x x x x x |
| Huxon270906 2007-08-16 ch 3, | abusegreat chapter huni, i loved it. Can't wait for the Sweet revenge chapter, this is so good babes, especially because ur writing it from Sam's POV, ur doing really well. Luv ya lots huni, Gemz xx |
| PhilHunterIsFine 2007-08-16 ch 3, | abuseWow. It's really good. very intense. hopwe you ud soon, cant wait to read more x x x ruth x x x |