i loved it a lot

That's quite good! I like the bittersweet tone of it, nice job!

Not bad. Actually, I quite liked it. Still, I would rather split the last paragraph into a few smaller ones, because as it is now, it turns into one long monologue without beginning and and, everything just melting together, and I don't think it's good. It's hard to keep ones attention like that.

Anyway, that's just my impression,and hugs for your girlfriend for this story.

A little bit shame it was so short, though...

I thought this was really adorable. The fact that you did it for your girlfriend made this story even more endearing. I like how you wrote about their relationship as breakable, both knowing that their current relationship couldn't go on; very realistic. Still, that last paragraph took a while to read. It was one HUGE paragraph, so...I got lost after the sixth or seventh sentence, and had to reread to get my bearings. lol Still, good story.