tell you the truth I was actually going to comment on the next and last chapter so I wouldn't waste time (ish supposed to be asleep) but I couldn't help myself.
You are a genius. I love your writing and the way you depicted Kuro-chi! I loved it so much! the way you ended this was just beautiful, it brought tears to my eyes! TT_TT please for the sake of gracing Kuro-fi with your awesomeness, write some more stories about Kurofai!

I love these introspections of drink -- so very deep for a favorable liquid.

I really enjoyed the stream of consciousness you employed with Yuuko -- really fits her character in this situation.

Nice work.

Lovely drabble. Very sad and straight to the point. I love it!

o.o;; a bit hard to follow but I think that's because the TV's on and my parents are discussing X-mas gifts. Fai... wants to drink himself to death to be rid of all the pain? *sigh* Poor Fai...

Wow, I was wondering why Fai loves alcohol so much. I mean, it couldn't just be because it tastes good like he said. This is a great explaination of it! ^^ Thanks for making it all (or almost all) clear to me! I thought no one would ever write about Fai's drinking habit! Great Job! ^.^

:3 I like it. It seems like exactly why Fai loves alcohol so much. : D

So sad, dark, and beautiful!

Wow, I was wondering when someone would make a fic based on Ashura's comment on Fai's drinking.