I love the part where the team said "I love you..."
Especially Raven. That was a great moment, both touching and hilarious. Nice job on the story

GOD! I love this story!

awhh,
e i soo love this story,
the seqeal to this story is it out yet or no?

lmao
KABOOM
heheeh
im lovn the story so far
its kinda diff from wat ive read before :D

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kori is gunna see dick
after like a long time
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Dan Dan Dan
whos at the doorbell?!?!?!

lol
i love Gar
in this story

awh,
i love it so far!
:D

OMG! I LOVR THIS STORY! I CRIED AT THE END! IT WAS SO SWEET! :`D *happy tears*

I have to say, I, like many people here, am absolutely in love with this fic. While I'm rather sceptical about the possibility of Star and Roy getting together because of all the things between them and the baggage that BOTH of them carry, this fic does an amazing job of sorting it out.

I was really happy with how Xavier was protrayed as well. It seems that people either make him a total asshole with no redeemable qualities, or everyone else is a moron and he gets justifiably angry. I adored reading his point of view and his emotions, without wanting to strange him myself. It's honestly the best representation I've read yet.

And I know some people have said that they think Raven is too cold, but I completely agree with it. You can slowly see her moving towards Beast Boy, when she's had her heart ripped out and stomped on a few times by Malchior. With her father being the way he is, I think it would make her withdraw even more so.

All in all, I adored it. I wish there were more fics like this out there.

Very interesting, I never would have guessed Robin would leave like that but than again you've managed to capture his personality well. Still it made me somewhat empty and as you said so yourself it was alot of awesome ideas but not linked as good as you'd expect. Though I loved the part that the story was focused on mainly Star and Raven, which by the way is a very unique yet fitting friends. Personally my favourite part was the last paragraph because it created a very meaningful mood to the story. It also explained -well more or less- why Raven was acting so different, though I would've enjoyed it more if it went further. Still I'm very excited how this story would turn out, now that they are grown up and Star is waiting for Robin to come back. I just can't wait for your next chapter, up-date soon!

Finally! I've finally found the master piece once more, yeah I read it a few months ago and I've been trying to look for it ever since. This is such an awesome fan fiction, though I hope this doesn't end up being a BB/Rae with Rob/Star fan fiction because I'm a Robin with Starfire fan. Still I think it would be interesting which ever ways it ends. Though it does add character, I mean with the whole Robin leaving her incident was heart-breaking. Well this fan fiction was the very first one I read, and I got hooked on them since! In fact this fan fiction inspired me to write one, though it's not up yet but I hope it will be soon. I love this fan fiction so please up-date soon and continue!

There is something wonderful and beautiful about the way you write, maybe it’s just me but I love your style. The details are there and yet it’s shown in a way that isn’t dull, in fact it’s very visual. Though I have to say it took me a bit longer than usual for me to warm up to your portrayal of the characters. I think it was mainly due to the fact that I could sense you were building them up, and I was merely starving for more, which you’ve clearly done and beyond because it’s rare for people to expand on characters. Most people choose events and drama to move Robin and Starfire closer, you, you’re very unique. You build on the characters, you take the ones from the show and expand, push the walls until new layers and personality is shown. I simply love it.

Especially Starfire, after reading the comics I was quite bitter with the way the show portrayed her. It took away her complexity and made her seem so insignificant. You took the ‘it’ girl and gave her new light by allowing Robin to catch her depth, that she is repressed by her own beauty. Funny that no one else had mentioned it, especially since the show had Robin empathize with her for it. I don’t know why I find that one detail so powerful but it turned something in my mind, like everything suddenly ‘clicked.’ Ignore this if it’s making absolutely no sense, all in all it mean you are an incredible writer.

As for Robin, I thought he was really spot on. Love the rambling, it really suits him. Another detail is how you’ve made him still very... corky? Umm...comfortable and yet awkward? When he’s with Star. Even though in the comic Robin said Star is one of the few people he is actually be fully comfortable with, you can still tell there is some tension and I would only imagine that these tension would build with the odd turn of events.

I kind of want to see some Flash, Justice League, and even Catwoman. Afterall that all of them had been the ones that forced Robin into where he is now.

And I hate leaving things on a negative note but I found Robin’s last remark off, a bit out of place sort of, it probably was just me. I dunno.

Once again, I loved it!

great T-T fic it was a great story keep it up AWESOME!

That, was, well, kinda terrifying. Nice job.