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Mrs. KJN Jonas 2008-01-24 ch 11,	abuseI really like this story. It's really good. And it has my Johnnycake in it. Please update soon.
xxxbloodyxxxdreamsxxx 2008-01-12 ch 11,	abuseYay! You updated! I love your story. I can't wait for the next chapter. Dally's up to no good as usual, lol. I hope you update soon! :3
Kristy 2008-01-05 ch 11, anon.	abuseSo there is a second one. I need to know what happens next. What is Dally going to do? Is something going to go wrong during the wedding.. it seems that way? Please update soon.
JohnnysTuffMustangs 2007-11-24 ch 10,	abuseANA!! I'M SO SORRY!! My computer exploded...so I haven't been on in FOREVER!! I am SO sorry...=( =( Anyway, this story is AMAZING!! Lori sounds so cute with Pony...Oh, that's not THAT big an age difference...One of MY friends (19, like me) is dating a 35 year old!! Haha, I kinda think it's funny...after I got over the whole creepy aspect... Okay, yeah..that had...no relevance...Anyways...I CAN'T WAIT TO GO TO THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
xXFlowerxChildXx 2007-11-15 ch 11,	abusethis chapter was a lot better, longer thats for sure. so Dallas wants to get to know Cleo. my my. i cant wait for the next chapter :D
lalajonas 2007-11-11 ch 6,	abusei LOVE it but i dont understand what dally is trying to do... kidnap her?? plz reply!
Pictures 2007-11-11 ch 11,	abuseah, it feels like forever since i reviewed. and I'm sorry about that- soccer took up a lot of my time. So, this story got really good and it's one of my favorites. And I absolutly(orhoweveryouspellthatword) love how you did this chapter, it's so romantic :) Update Soon! :)
dreamer 3097 2007-11-04 ch 10,	abusethis is good
xXFlowerxChildXx 2007-11-04 ch 10,	abuseoww oww ponyboy curtis! naughty...
Teh Nette Speaks 2007-11-04 ch 10,	abuseLori and Ms. Lori seem to look an awful lot alike... I wonder. lol. For a very cliche plotline, I'm surprised that the story is better than I thought it would be. It's a nice surprise. I like that it is realistic, in the sense that money doesn't grow on trees. I'm glad they're actually working normal jobs, worrying about making ends meet, and they live in a small apartment. I like your writing style, and although the POV randomly switched a few times throughout, it was relatively easy to figure out who it switched too. A tip on grammar/spelling- read through it one last time before posting because there are a few things that spell-check won't pick up on. The "s" in the word "she" is missing a few times. I would work on character development, particularly Dallas. His thoughts and actions are a little choppy. Favorite line of the story so far- “I don’t care, Daddy. Froggie wanted to be there too.” it's adorable. Sorry, for the monsterly review. My first review's usually the longest, and I tried to fit 10 chapters worth of reviews into 1, and still make it thorough. ~Nette
Aerliin Skylarre 2007-10-30 ch 1,	abusehm...why is Cleo having dreams about Ronni's death...? that's really interesting/creepy. I had a hard time imagining Johnny being loud in bed. But I did. And it was an, errmm, interesting mental video. Hahaha. Can't wait for more! I really like it =) Aer.
xXFlowerxChildXx 2007-10-27 ch 9,	abusei am so glad dally gets to go to the wedding:) i cant wait for that chapter. lisa
JohnnysTuffMustangs 2007-10-19 ch 9,	abuseOh Dally!! Now I don't know...He WAS bothering me before, but now he's making me feel bad for him...I'm glad he's going to the wedding...Aww, now I feel like everyone's abandoning him...and I feel bad. Haha, Ponyboy, you are hilarious. I love that little kid...I hope he ends up with that girl, I feel like they would make a good couple =) Anyway, again, you're writing is absolutely outstanding. Really, I have no complaints or anything =) Continue what you're doing, and the story will continue to be abosolutely incredible!! P.S. I hope you've gotten your normal computer back =)
dreamer 3097 2007-10-19 ch 9,	abusethis is good
xXFlowerxChildXx 2007-10-11 ch 8,	abusei am prolly updateing tomarrow. we both update like snails. but we rock so. what in the world is dally doing with that frog?? well i cant wait for more :)

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