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AblatedCrayon
2009-10-10 . chapter 6
Ahh, a very good stopping point for this chapter. You've certainly done an excellent job of the romance between these two so far! It's excruciating in a wonderful way to watch their stilted progression towards each other.

I'm happy to see your writer's block took a remission!
AblatedCrayon
shawn,spacezillazon@yahoo.com
2009-10-05 . chapter 6
WOW WOW you got my interested in what's going to happen next!! This is very intriguing story I want to read more and more I hope you make more and more chapters!! It's a well rounded and great story. Keep it up I would love to read more
skywiseskychan
2009-09-22 . chapter 6
Its wonderful to see your continuing this story. Its been quite a while but it took me only about two seconds to place it and smile when I read the email notification there was more out. Thanks
grayangle
2009-09-21 . chapter 6
Well this was a heart warming chapter in parts. And it almost got to warming other parts. The one great almost unredemeable problem with this story is the time between updates! If it was not for that this chapter would have been great. Now it is just exceptible. More please and sooner.
crystalfeathers
2009-09-21 . chapter 6
That was a sweet ending. ^_^
Generalbox
2009-09-20 . chapter 6
good chap i cant believe how long its been since you updated it, it feels like it has been forever.
cant wait for more and hopefully i wont have to wait as long for the next chap
jojobevco
2009-04-18 . chapter 5
good story
the corruptor of shadows
2009-01-13 . chapter 5
this story is amazing, it's hard to stop reading. Yet, you haven't written anymore, you gotta keep going! it's too good to end here! please?
AblatedCrayon
2008-10-06 . chapter 5
I love this fic! I don't begrudge the use of OC's, I think this one is positively inspired. I hope your muse directs you to chapter 6 soon!

I can totally see myself being just as awkward as Kellen around Talia, trying to do the right thing and help her through a second childhood, basically.

Great work thus far, and I'll be keeping an eye out for updates!
AblatedCrayon
Bane
2008-09-28 . chapter 1
Great story, and i hope you continue it.
grayangle
2008-09-23 . chapter 5
So now they are treasure hunting? Well this should be fun. More please.
crystalfeathers
2008-08-21 . chapter 5
^_^
Roque Amadi
2008-08-21 . chapter 5
Hey, love the way this story is developing. Update soon :)
skywiseskychan
2008-08-18 . chapter 5
Personally I think that as written Kellen is just as endearing if not more so than Talia in his determination to do the right thing. I do hope that in the end Talia does get her man and he his woman because by then they'll deserve the happyness they can get. I'm looking forward to seeing how you have this new family relate to one another. Talia accepts things so quickly it shouldnt take long for them to accept her either. As for Dak at least he's not really pushing Kellen, just giving him a litle nudge.
skywiseskychan
2008-08-18 . chapter 4
Alright, hes found dirrection! well of a sort. Though han-ish spacers realy are probably not the best or safest dirrection to go. Good luck Kellen.

And good luck staying out of well I would have said bed but that failed, so maybe staying in his pants.
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