In general, the piece could use more sensory details and overall description. However, it's a promising opening. Good luck as this progresses.

it was an ok chapter could be improved but other than that i luv it please continue and update soon

tnx

You have to show them completing the dares, I'm sure one of the challenges can refer to the kiss.

Not too shabby, lol j/k. It was very good for a start. Are you going to do the Themes in order or randomly?

This is a great start, really. A few errors, but nothing major. Very cute!

cute, love this pairing