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| mokimik 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseokay, don't have much time to review this, but since it was such a wonderful opening, I found I had to. However, I didn't like the ending. At all. I get that she doesn't have a happy ending, but you can't blame it on all her brothers. Bill can't help that he's falling in love with fleur and being attacked. If that would make Ginny like him less, she must be really shallow, and I think she's not. And another example: Since she obviously grieves or has grieved for Fred, she would understand completely that George "is no fun at all" Duh. He lost his twin! sorry if I sound a bt harsh, but I just got dissapointed by reading the end of such a wonderfull started tale. x-mokimik-x |
| ShadowedDark 2008-01-02 ch 1, | abuseI loved it. It's FANTASTIC! I started tearing when I read the brothers part. But what really struck me was the last line "Don't worry, Fred. I'll be that sister and bring you back." It's perfect, and amazing. I wish you wrote more though. I want to see what happens to the brothers. Good story. Beautiful. Keep Writing! _ROCK_ON_ ShadowedDark |
| True Queen Of Chaos 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuseWell, that was sad... I dont know why, but I thought it was going to end funny... hmm. Despite the fact that I'm a moron and didnt see were the story was headed in the least, I liked it. well done... |