Wow. I just cannot simply explain my satisfaction with this story in mere words. This is a very finely crafted fiction, which I will be sure to respect. I definately have to alert my friends to this, since this is such examplatory work. The fighting scenes were unbelievable, and the feelings that were desciribed within the heart of this 'simple beauty' were easilly felt, and were able to blend together into a truely heart-racing suspence/sci-fi document. I am very impressed with the desriptors and words of detail, and I'm still extremely amazed by how well you kept the characters In Character. That itself is a feat not easilly copied by anyone. I'm grateful for having such a great author post such a great document on this site. Your fiction is one of the handful out there that I strive to find. Bravo! I really hope that you post another fiction like this one in this archive again! I really enjoyed reading this masterpiece of words and emotion.

~Charlie

This seems like this could have been an actual episode for Invader Zim...this is so freaking awesome...it is amazing...You made Zim and Dib and Gir and Gaz and all characters very much in-character...I honestly don't see how this could be topped by ANY other Zim fanfiction that I have read thus far...

wow that was the best amazing story! i love how you wrote this out, and kept zim and dim oraginal and not being ooc,awesome job!

How did I MISS this?! It's awesome! There are a few grammatical errors like missed commas or "to" for "too," but I was too busy trying to read as fast as humanly possible to care in the slightest. You really crank it up with the suspense! I really liked what you did with Zim and Dib's relationship, but this was such a significant event that I would have to imagine things wouldn't be quite the same -- which is good, it moves beyond canon. You also nail quite a few things that other authors seem to miss, like Dib being a child (and thus occasionally childish) to Zim's adult, and Zim being capable of genuine moments of cleverness. (For the record, GIR is perfect too.)

Good Story .. =D


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WOW! This is the most well-written story I've read in a while. It's definitely going in my favorites :) Two thumbs up, and I'd give you more if I had another thumb.

Not original? This is the most original plotline I've ever seen!

And you got them very in character too!

By the way, I recognize you from deviantart. Love your coloring works.

simply awesome

I really loved this. It is very well written and the action kept me stuck on it. I couldn't turn my eyes away. You got Zim and Dib's interaction down perfectly! You should continue it somehow, I wanna know who the DARU's masters are and what's gonna happen to Irk!

Excellent work!
~Silverphoenix-21 (Bluesoru ^^)

That was awesome! You wrote them so well! The dynamic between Dib and Zim is (in my opinion) one of the most deliciously twisted relationships in animation history, and you captured it spectacularly. Please do a sequel, I would love to see where this development takes us. Will they ever become friends? I love this stuff. Anyhow, splendid story, engaging, well-written. Bravo!

Hallo! ^^) Tiz Thirteen-Ghosts from dA... This story is the sheet! =D It may be your typical Invader Zim destructo story... but it just kicks **. ^^ After I've read it and all... you've got me wondering who the DARU's master(s) are. *Favs*

I don't see why you you say your not good at fics this was awesome :D now you should write one with your OC's