i think this is a beautiful piece.

That was beautiful! I can't even begin to discribe how much I loved it :)

... hot...

this is incredible. i mean, wow.

the scenery, your portrayal of deidara, the word ephemeral. it's my new favourite word.

That was pure poetry I tell you!

I saw this on lj. I loved it there, read it again and loved it more~
Faved! -Cho

Wow, thaa woz smexy.Very nice jobb. Write more,eh?

Wow. This is really beautiful. Your writing is amazing, everything flows really well. Great job. :D

I love how you describe the smoke and the enviroment around Deidara and Tobi.
Awesome work~ =3