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| XX-XDKuroNeko-ChanXD-XX 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseTHAT WAS GOOD... you coulda kept going...! |
| xXonly-live-twiceXx 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Very good. i cant wait to read the sequel |
| ed's.angel 2008-04-16 ch 1, | abusewow! that was really good! i wanna know who did that to poor Ed! going to read the sequel... ^.^ fma.angle xoxo |
| Skitty Kat Girl 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseOh noez but Roy's coat is still dirty and now is probably covered with blood! (mission unaccomplished...Bad Edo-kun!) Na just kidding. That was good I guess *goes to read the sequel now* |
| namine 2008-02-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease make the next chappie i cant wait |
| EdElricFan1001 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseWOW!! I can review on my own story!! I opefully posting the chapter of the sequel in the next few days so be watchful!! EdElricFan1001 |
| Ayumi Elric 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuse-chose to read this one because it's the only one she saw that didn't have any EdxWin in it- This is really good~ it was a very strange place to cut off for a oneshot, it has more of the appearance of a chapter story -ponders- But I like your writing style. There's nothing really that OOC about it -ponders again- Although I doubt that Ed would ever say 'Darn' instead of 'Damn' -shrugs- Maybe you just don't like writing curses or something? It's fine XP Just a minor detail, lol. Gonna read the sequel~ Just don't bribe people anymore to post something for an amount of reviews, 'kay? -pat pat- ~Ayumi |
| Sora Livana 2007-12-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseCool! Whens the sequel coming out? |
| edPod 2007-10-09 ch 1, | abuseYes! I finally found it! I read the sequel and now I've found this. It's better than I thought but much shorter too... Oh well. I found it a bit funny. My thought--"Only Ed would find a way to get killed during a trip to the dry-cleaner's." |
| TenshiElric 2007-10-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseGR *gets huge evil anime eyes and a bat* *goes of to read the sequel so she can beat the shit out of whoever hurt her edo-kun* |
| renlacarne 2007-10-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseoi! im reviewing now post it!! post it!! POST IT!! *waves banner reading UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE* *grabs megaphone and yells POST IT! POST IT!! turning the mild crowd into a roaring mob* |
| HuMaN-EaTiNg-PaNdA -HEP- 2007-09-19 ch 1, | abuseSo r u goin to update this one? i would think that 24 reviews wuld be enough its actuall alot considering its a one shot so PLEASE FINISH IT! |
| Tears of Eternal Darkness 2007-09-11 ch 1, | abuseNO! you can't stop now! that's evil! i know it says complete but i really hope you continue this someday, you've got such a good story-line here! well, i guess you're not going to, but if you do, let me know! =^-^= |
| The Sacred Pandapuff 2007-08-26 ch 1, | abuseParental, yippee! Though it wasn't clear why Ed was attacked and left unfinished I liked the fluffness of it. |
| Azure Teriques 2007-08-20 ch 1, | abuseI like it. Wonderful work.^^ |