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Reviews For: Closer Than We Thought - Reviews: Page 1 of 3

XX-XDKuroNeko-ChanXD-XX
2008-07-02
ch 1,
abuseTHAT WAS GOOD... you coulda kept going...!
xXonly-live-twiceXx
2008-05-20
ch 1,
abuseI like it. Very good. i cant wait to read the sequel
ed's.angel
2008-04-16
ch 1,
abusewow! that was really good! i wanna know who did that to poor Ed! going to read the sequel... ^.^

fma.angle xoxo
Skitty Kat Girl
2008-03-17
ch 1,
abuseOh noez but Roy's coat is still dirty and now is probably covered with blood! (mission unaccomplished...Bad Edo-kun!)
Na just kidding.
That was good I guess *goes to read the sequel now*
namine
2008-02-14
ch 1, anon.
abuseplease make the next chappie i cant wait
EdElricFan1001
2008-02-13
ch 1,
abuseWOW!! I can review on my own story!!

I opefully posting the chapter of the sequel in the next few days so be watchful!!

EdElricFan1001
Ayumi Elric
2008-01-30
ch 1,
abuse-chose to read this one because it's the only one she saw that didn't have any EdxWin in it-

This is really good~ it was a very strange place to cut off for a oneshot, it has more of the appearance of a chapter story -ponders- But I like your writing style. There's nothing really that OOC about it -ponders again- Although I doubt that Ed would ever say 'Darn' instead of 'Damn' -shrugs- Maybe you just don't like writing curses or something? It's fine XP Just a minor detail, lol. Gonna read the sequel~ Just don't bribe people anymore to post something for an amount of reviews, 'kay? -pat pat-

~Ayumi
Sora Livana
2007-12-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseCool! Whens the sequel coming out?
edPod
2007-10-09
ch 1,
abuseYes! I finally found it! I read the sequel and now I've found this. It's better than I thought but much shorter too... Oh well. I found it a bit funny. My thought--"Only Ed would find a way to get killed during a trip to the dry-cleaner's."
TenshiElric
2007-10-03
ch 1, anon.
abuseGR *gets huge evil anime eyes and a bat* *goes of to read the sequel so she can beat the shit out of whoever hurt her edo-kun*
renlacarne
2007-10-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseoi! im reviewing now post it!! post it!! POST IT!! *waves banner reading UPDATEUPDATEUPDATE*
*grabs megaphone and yells POST IT! POST IT!! turning the mild crowd into a roaring mob*
HuMaN-EaTiNg-PaNdA -HEP-
2007-09-19
ch 1,
abuseSo r u goin to update this one?
i would think that 24 reviews wuld be enough
its actuall alot considering its a one shot
so

PLEASE FINISH IT!
Tears of Eternal Darkness
2007-09-11
ch 1,
abuseNO! you can't stop now! that's evil! i know it says complete but i really hope you continue this someday, you've got such a good story-line here! well, i guess you're not going to, but if you do, let me know!
=^-^=
The Sacred Pandapuff
2007-08-26
ch 1,
abuseParental, yippee! Though it wasn't clear why Ed was attacked and left unfinished I liked the fluffness of it.
Azure Teriques
2007-08-20
ch 1,
abuseI like it. Wonderful work.^^
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