 Saya Moonshadow 2008-05-15 . chapter 2...HEE. I totally love you. X3
I think I'm gonna have to download this song. It does sound sweet! And TahuGali! WOO! First pairing I ever supported for anything XD
It was really sweet, and I'm totally happy that they were able to find common love again X3 The ending, as usual, was fantastic. You're very good at ending fics, much better than I am. That's the part I always have trouble on XD
Thanks so MUCH! I LOVE it! *glomp* |
 Py687 2008-05-14 . chapter 2Hmm, this is good! I found it confusing though, like where Tahu and Gali were. Did I skip something? (Edit: I reread it; they were in a cafe THE WHOLE TIME. So what was that about a divorce?)
A minor typo: you forgot to end "what if's" with either a second quotation mark or taking out the first one.
Chapter Score: 8/10 |