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Reviews for: Bionicle Melodies
Saya Moonshadow
2008-05-15 . chapter 2
...HEE. I totally love you. X3

I think I'm gonna have to download this song. It does sound sweet! And TahuGali! WOO! First pairing I ever supported for anything XD

It was really sweet, and I'm totally happy that they were able to find common love again X3 The ending, as usual, was fantastic. You're very good at ending fics, much better than I am. That's the part I always have trouble on XD

Thanks so MUCH! I LOVE it! *glomp*
Py687
2008-05-14 . chapter 2
Hmm, this is good! I found it confusing though, like where Tahu and Gali were. Did I skip something? (Edit: I reread it; they were in a cafe THE WHOLE TIME. So what was that about a divorce?)

A minor typo: you forgot to end "what if's" with either a second quotation mark or taking out the first one.

Chapter Score: 8/10
Saya Moonshadow
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
Wow! Another drabble collection yay! :D

Poor Lewa...ONUA COME BACK! *wails* XD

More please! :D
dark raven0
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
That was so very sad, yet so very good at the same time 0.o you and your writing is truly amazing!
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