Another great love story.

aww this was such a cute little story ^0^ keep up the good work.

I like it! ^_^ i actually never watched Cybertron or any of the new series past Armada, i was getting confused at all the plotholes. O:) I like this, it's very sweet. ^_^

Fin as in finished . . . Like with the story?!! NO!! that can't be it was getting good. You better continue or else . . . or else . . . or else I'll cry that's what. I love Hot Shot and Override pairings I mean I'll be doing one myself way in the future. Please continue or if not write more about Hot Shot and Override cause you know how much I love to read about them.;)

aww how sweet :D very well written ;)

Ah yes, this reminds me of an uncut, revealing scene in the Cybertron series, where Hot Shot and Override's attraction to one another that is hinted at throughout the series, is confirmed.

You certainly have talent as a writer, and it is a great first ficlet. For the most part, it conveys a certain sense of reality to a TF pairing that many others fail to do well. I appreciate that there are other authors out there who continue to write for the traditional TF continuities. There are so many '07movieverse fics coming out of the woodwork now, all the others seem to be drowning in the tidal wave...

Anyway, you should definitely keep writing.

This was an awesome chapter! I loved it! You need to update and I mean NOW! I really enjoyed it and hope to read more soon!

Those two are a great couple. I love this fic. Yay for Romance!...lol

Megatron: -Finds you and tackles you- My Twinkies -Takes them back and walks off-

Harley: XD Megabutt your mean! You share!

Megatron: NEVA! -Runs away-

Harley: -Laughs- Well love the fan-fic, keep up the good work! and maybe if i'm pestered enough I'll put up a few chapters of the facfics i'm working on.

Megatron: -Comes back and puts Harley over shoulder- Come along Bubbilicous

Harley: -Sighs and shrugs- Review you lata! -Winks and waves-

Megatron: Whatever...Evil Twinkie Stealer.

DUDE

THIS IS MY FAVO COUPLE OF ALL TIME

I LOVE THIS MAKE MORE, MORE I SAY -laughs evily-

and dude, the song i sang was the remix to "Numb"

by the way have you seen the new Transformers movie?

EK!

That's my mega-fangirl squeal!

You've done amazing for your first story!!

I hope there's lots more where that came from!

:D

LOL cute i like it. Its pretty good for your first one i love hotshot so ya it made it all the more better. But ya you'll have no problem get a good story going when the idea hits you =]

that was good for a first one really liked how you described everything. look forward for some more fics.
-P.R.

Loved it. :)