That's so sweet! :) I always felt bad for Snape (though I got furious with him at times I knew deep down he was all right) and you did an amazing job here! It's just like Lily to say things like that and for Snape to look down on himself. If only he had more people than just Lily to be there for him he could have changed. :( Great job!

After reading your Bleach/Naruto crossover I had to check out your other fics. I really like this one, it shows the good friendship between Lilly and Snape.

Very sweet fic, it made me smile! You write well. There are only a few errors with grammar and sometimes you slipped between past and present tense, but other than that I have nothing bad to say at all. I love the way the characters are portrayed here and the situation is very believable. A quick kiss - It's such a small and simple thing that it could actually have happened, which makes me happy. Thanks for the story!

oh! it's very cute. I am not a great fan of Snape and I love JP/LE but since the 7th book, he is growing in my feeling. I was sure that if he was "good", that was because he loves Lily but I couldn't expected that they were friends before Hogwarts! So, now that we are informed about their friendship (and love in one way), I think that your idea is very smart! (I like the last sentence!) And, I'm not English (but French) so I don't know if there are some mistakes in your fanfic (or in my review XD lol) but I have all understood ^^

NYA! That was /so/ sweet! I guess it does deserve to go on my Fave... Yup.

Dudly -xx-

i love this pairing! but only as teenagers, not adults...poor poor snape.

this was an extremely cute story. it could practically be a ron/hermione fic too, but i liked this one alot. good work =]

Man... now I love J/L as much as the next J/L lover, but this just made me want to stick Snape and Lily together.

So sad it just wasnt ment to be...

Loved the story, well written, it was fun to read!