That was an amazingly good story. Very amusing and very funny. Anymore? or is this it? Really well done! Good job!

Come on! You can't leave it there! Get your but to and finish this bad baby! Please?

LOL! Great one-shot. Very jack, though I think owen would be a bit freaked out :P

Ok, Serious side first-

The gramma needs a LOAD of work. Perhaps get a betta.

Characters are written beautifull. Don't forget spacing.

Ok, not so serious side-

OMFG! That's hilarious!

"You know Jack", she said, giggling. "I could make a fortune with a sexual harassment suit".

I LOVE that!

You have some of the best one liners in here!

So, my idea- work on your gramma and setting out then get to writting some more comedys!

Cheers, Kazza xoxo

Hee hee hee, I loved it it had me giggling for ages