 MosJorMia 2009-12-04 . chapter 2I had a pretty good laugh
Thanks! I kind of needed it |
 nogin95 2009-11-17 . chapter 2awsome love this story please do another chapter |
 KristyRose 2009-09-03 . chapter 2Funny, funny stuff. And very well-written too! |
 jacobsacutiepie 2009-08-16 . chapter 2 HAHAHA! omg i just loved this story. <3 hilarious. and of course cuz im a jacob fan and bella and jacob seem to be getting along the way i wanted in this fanfict. ;)lol |
 jessicakaycobb 2009-08-06 . chapter 2BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
i love it. seriously. jacob made me lol with his adorable over-confidence, i mean, it was totally *him*. this was great!
hahaha "did you like what you saw?" hahaha
we all did, jake, we all did. |
 Queen.of.Ink 2009-08-01 . chapter 2BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! i love this! so funny, embarrassed bella. JACOB NAKED (sigh)! |
 Bella's Pixie sister 2009-07-28 . chapter 2LMAO, i loved this it was so funny! |
 avidreader310 2009-07-14 . chapter 2LOL tht was really funnee! |
 Permanent Rose 2009-07-11 . chapter 2That was cute haha. It must've gotten pretty awkward for them one Leah joined the pack...
Just one complaint. I think you should denote who's POV its in at the beginning of the chapter. It was easy enough to figure it out one I started reading, but it would've been nicer to know the POV going into the chapter.
It was very well written though, and you have a good grasp on the characters. i really enjoyed it (: |
 spinningleaves 2009-06-21 . chapter 2Ahaha! Ohh poor Bella! So embarrassing! Very cute piece! |
 XJackAndSkyLuvX 2009-06-21 . chapter 2haha :) bellas blush is as good as a confirmation to the guys. whoo! lols great for a laugh |
 Niamh D 2009-06-12 . chapter 2That was hilarious. It would be interesting if we found out the answer to Jacob's question! =P |
 onceuponanovember 2009-05-20 . chapter 2LOVED IT! I really needed a smile today, so this was absolutely perfect! |
 VampyAngel17 2009-05-12 . chapter 2That was awesome!
Great 2 shot (: |
 Shining Golden 2009-04-04 . chapter 2LOL... great fic, very original! I love the interaction of the pack boys - so lighthearted. |