Reviews for The Naked WolfBoys of La Push
MamiMia 12/4/09 . chapter 2
I had a pretty good laugh

Thanks! I kind of needed it
nogin95 11/17/09 . chapter 2
awsome love this story please do another chapter
KristyRose 9/3/09 . chapter 2
Funny, funny stuff. And very well-written too!
jacobsacutiepie 8/16/09 . chapter 2
HAHAHA! omg i just loved this story. 3 hilarious. and of course cuz im a jacob fan and bella and jacob seem to be getting along the way i wanted in this fanfict. ;)lol
jessicakaycobb 8/6/09 . chapter 2
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

i love it. seriously. jacob made me lol with his adorable over-confidence, i mean, it was totally *him*. this was great!

hahaha "did you like what you saw?" hahaha

we all did, jake, we all did.
Queen.of.Ink 8/1/09 . chapter 2
BAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! i love this! so funny, embarrassed bella. JACOB NAKED (sigh)!
iFanfic369 7/28/09 . chapter 2
LMAO, i loved this it was so funny!
avidreader310 7/14/09 . chapter 2
LOL tht was really funnee!
Permanent Rose 7/11/09 . chapter 2
That was cute haha. It must've gotten pretty awkward for them one Leah joined the pack...

Just one complaint. I think you should denote who's POV its in at the beginning of the chapter. It was easy enough to figure it out one I started reading, but it would've been nicer to know the POV going into the chapter.

It was very well written though, and you have a good grasp on the characters. i really enjoyed it (:
spinningleaves 6/21/09 . chapter 2
Ahaha! Ohh poor Bella! So embarrassing! Very cute piece!
XJackAndSkyLuvX 6/21/09 . chapter 2
haha :) bellas blush is as good as a confirmation to the guys. whoo! lols great for a laugh
Niamh D 6/12/09 . chapter 2
That was hilarious. It would be interesting if we found out the answer to Jacob's question! P
onceuponanovember 5/20/09 . chapter 2
LOVED IT! I really needed a smile today, so this was absolutely perfect!
BrittanysBee 5/12/09 . chapter 2
That was awesome!

Great 2 shot (:
Shining Golden 4/4/09 . chapter 2
LOL... great fic, very original! I love the interaction of the pack boys - so lighthearted.
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