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imahyperactivebunnyrabbit
2008-03-31
ch 14,
abusemore...More...MORE!
imahyperactivebunnyrabbit
2008-03-27
ch 4,
abusei love this pleas ekeep on.
ObesEdWiThSodapOp
2008-02-08
ch 7,
abuseHahahaha.. hornyboy! Genius...I luv this story so far. :)

-Stephanie
dreamer 3097
2007-10-14
ch 10,
abusethis is good
electricguitarsrockmysocks
2007-09-23
ch 14,
abuseIt's a good plot, just a few spelling errors. I love the story, but you need to watch your grammar. For instance, don't use the same word more than twice in one sentence, and watch how you spell. You need to double check and triple check your work. But I absolutely love the plot, and I can't wait for you to update. Great job!

Oh, and it's 'Whinnie the Pooh' and 'Tigger'. Er, no, I don't watch it. . . . *shifty eyes*
imgonnaliveforever
2007-09-18
ch 14,
abuseYou REALLY need to update!!please =)
My-Arabian-Knight
2007-09-03
ch 14,
abuseSTUPID SANDY
SHE MEAN
ME NO LIKE HER
UD SOON
:)
Greaser Girl 4 Life
2007-09-03
ch 14,
abuseYEAH Pony...go hurt that Sandy. Soda, don't listen to her...NO! Update soon please!
edwards other bella
2007-09-03
ch 14,
abuseOH! I DONT LIKE HER! and its winney the pooh adn tigger
electricguitarsrockmysocks
2007-09-02
ch 13,
abuseGood job, a few spelling errors, but good all the same. Update soon!
My-Arabian-Knight
2007-09-01
ch 13,
abuseMERG
STUPID STORM
POOR CURTIS'S/RANDLES
MORE SOON
:)
edwards other bella
2007-08-31
ch 13,
abusethis chapter was ok, i liked what happened, but when ur doing this, make sure that ur spelling is right...like bare not bear...stuff like that
Greaser Girl 4 Life
2007-08-31
ch 13,
abuseIf the state doesn't help...I will hurt them personly. Don't ask how.
Sammy-Wisconsin Angel
2007-08-31
ch 13,
abuseaww! damn! tornado ruined stuff! That's so sad! But Thank God they're all okay!
Swizzlet-Schiz
2007-08-26
ch 12,
abuseplz update soon!this was great/
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