Great story! I loved the ending- classic!

Interesting...
The ending was funny, Nice Job. You wrote them both very well.
Love the line, "They’d all paused to mourn its loss after Edward took Bella back home." LOL

haha, I liked the ending!

Great job.

ahh i really liked this. I love esme and carlisle. Great job!

Very cute story! I haven't read too many about Carlisle and Esme, but I think that you did a great job. I really enjoyed reading this.

Thanks for writing!

~Four and Twenty Blackbirds~

haha... eww... from the kids pov...

thats a really good short story. Well done !!