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| mangamaniacgurl 2008-07-06 ch 9,  | abuseI LOVE this fanfiction!! Too many stories don't focus on Team Gai, so this is a new twist! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! I WILL BE WAITING! YOSH! |
| Flame05 2008-07-06 ch 9, | abuseI love it! CAnt wait for the next chapter |
| Naruto the cat king 2008-06-24 ch 9, | abusegreat story so far please update soon |
| lenodais 2008-06-15 ch 9, | abuseGreat story, update soon. Hope theirs some Nejiten moments coming up. Poor Neji :( Please update soon! |
| Lolchen 2008-05-19 ch 9, | abuse*rofl* This fic is GREAT! It's delicious! I like reading it ^^ It's funny, emotional, well explained, informational (in a way at least) and just... doesn't suck! It's no Shota as well, though I love Neji x Tenten. I'd like to see them befriend with the Trio slowly, and when then Sirius comes into the comon room and later they follow him... I want to see how well they do in fighting! Oh, but I got something which's just a lil bit annoying, if you can even say so. I don't know how to say it, anyways, you should probably go into detail somewhere how they are able to use their chakra with the wand etc. if they can use it, how far beyond the others they are and so on ^^ I think you didn't mention it... Please, update soon! mfG, Lolchen |
| juunigatsu4ame 2008-05-17 ch 9, | abusew00t! Go Team Gai! I love this so far. Update soon please! |
| ChristinaAngel 2008-05-17 ch 9, | abuseGood chapter and Neji tricking Snape was brilliant! I loved how protective Tenten and Lee were of Neji but especially Tenten. It's really sweet. Thanks for updating! |
| SnowCharms 2008-05-16 ch 9, | abuseShe must hv astounded d whole class when she threw her knife at him...lol...i guess that old habits die hard...i'm surprised that Snape actually wants 2 know what happened...but then again he could always use that info on them...update! |
| Iris-Phoenix 2008-05-15 ch 9, | abuseNice way to end the chapter -giggles insanely- Ahem, right, love the story, and the way things are going. Keep up the good work! |
| Gemina 2008-05-14 ch 9, | abuseYay! An update! I love this story, it's hilarious and dramatic all at the same time! Update soon please! |
| Amitra Day 2008-05-13 ch 8, anon. | abuseThis is an excellent fanfiction, however there seems to be one major problem. Team Gai seem to be acting like... jerks, really. They're unrealistically overreacting to simple things. Other than that this is a wonderful story. It's just, their temper tantrums do get tiresome. |
| Yukiusagi101 2008-05-12 ch 9, | abuseeverytime i keep reading this it keeps getting better and better. i love it how you can perfectly imagine the charachters saying this. i got to say you are my idol dude, i want to write great fanfics like you. |
| Vld 2008-05-12 ch 9, | abuseWho needs magic to one-up Snape? Or even Ninja tricks? Certainly not Team Gai... that should tell you something, right? GO NEJI! |
| Anime-rocz-nd-u-no-it 2008-05-12 ch 9, | abuseReading and reviewing! Snape and Neji get along, woo! So whens it gonna be Christmas? You know I realy love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter even if it takes forever to come up. Keep up the awsome job! Anime-rocz-nd-u-no-it (A.K.A M'n'M) |
| Serenity_Weapons 2008-05-12 ch 9, anon. | abuseGreat story. Can u put in ALOT more of NejiTen please? And PLEASE PLEASE update a little faster! your wait is KILLING me! |