Nice. I do think that if Rose and Martha had met under different circumstances that they might have been friends.

Thanks for writing.

gr8 story

"They were the sort of people, Martha realized ruefully, that her own mother used as cautionary tales to keep her and Tish and Leo in school" and the little death in her eyes were both brilliant.

I really liked this.

Aww...I especially liked the part when Martha bumped into Nine. That was a nice little nudge of nostalgia ^_^

That's good but why have Donna and Martha? We don't need the ginger give us back Martha :'(:'(:'(. This was a great idea to help Martha move on although a little dangerous.

Really nice idea! :) I was a little worried for a bit, but that was absolutely beautiful. Martha needs closure and this was just so sweet. And Rose... my heart just went out to her. Of course, so did Martha's. Great job. Like someone else said, I can't imagine the Doctor actually ALLOWING this to happen, but after you get past that little hurdle, this is fantastic! ;-) Besides, who is to say it couldn't happen. It's not like the Doctor never had trouble programming his magnificent time ship anyway. LOL This is a keeper! Thanks for sharing.

I really enjoyed it. It wasn't too long, it was just right. I love the way you described Rose because that's true, she's not typically beautiful and yet she is. I love the way you used the time machine and had Martha be the one that actually nudged them together. Brilliant. I'd love to see something like that in the new series, that would be a great episode.

that was beautiful.

I love how he saved her, but less obviously, she saved him.

Brilliant

Aw...that was cute. Can't believe the Doctor let her get away with it, but awesome nonetheless. keep up the great work!

Awesome :-) I liked the bit where Martha walked back into the TARDIS and said: "Nice running into you, too" lol :-)

Ehe, very good. I liked it! :D

::gobsmacked:: brilliant! tied in very well! i loved it! hehhe, she met nine! :D

Very neat: nicely written and judged, and good characterisation...

That was really nice

Brilliant! I could see it as if they would make it as a show.

No elements in the story changed to a point where it was complicated.

It was short and it was to the point.

Nothing out of the ordinary, just brilliant.

vic