i love your story its slow building up but in a good way

And will Draco take him back?

Nice chapter.

Amber

very interesting

Aww! That's so cute! Poor worried Harry! Lol mount Draco like a fucking gazelle! Ahh Harry. He should ride Draco's broom fo sure!!

And huzzah for a concerned!Severus! Even more for the fact that you updated. Btw, I think you wrote could instead of couldn't at one point...

xoxo

LOVE YOU LYK WHOA!

Dera, justme-jane. I absoultely luv your storie, it starts out slow but still gets the point across, Harry seems as if he don't realise what he's feeling for Draco. The wae you do it is very subtle, no? Not many authors can do that and you di it very well.

Please keep it up, and sorry if my review is hard to understand english is kind of diffcult lange to learn.

But i still thonk your doing a gret job with my favourite yaoi pairing, you are very Awesme.

Your greatist fan

Justine,

Like this story :D I'll wait until you feel ready to update it again, don't worry ^^

No problem - and I'm glad your mom's ok! :)

Hey no worries. Real life happens for everyone unfortunately. You won't lose any readers over real life, so don't worry about it.

thanks for the update hun. Hope all goes well for you =]

I was kind of wondering when you were gonna post a new chapter, but shoot, i so know what you mean.
I've been really busy as well, but i did post chapter 10 of "Fantasy" not to long ago, but it's been ALONG time since i had posted, and i had alot of people pushing me to continue.
I'm so sorry about your mother, that's really sad to hear =(

I also know what you mean about alot of birthdays as well, first it was my friends Nick's b-day, then it was mine on Feburary 19th, and i turned 19 FINALLY, lol.
And happy belated birthday by the way! =)

I'm glad to know your not abononing your story, and really relieved that i'm not the only one who's been so busy that writing has had to take back seat for a long time. lol.

Well i hope your mom's okay, and doesn't get worse, and good luck with your mid-terms, (I have four the week after spring break) and just good luck with continuing the story, (I know how difficult it is to continue) but i am so intisapating what happens next, =)

Take care! =)

Thanks for the note. We'll keep waiting for your next update. :)

i'd say, if you love something let it go. if it doesnt' come back, go after it and DRAG it back, damnit! if you wont' even chase after then why would they come back?! staying would be their choice, but you do everything YOU can for it. and is he gonna jump, what? timelines, dimensions? that part's a little iffy...but yeah.

couldn't he have just gone to draco and said sorry? after all, draco was willing to wait for him, of all things. how many people who "claim" to be in love would do that?

hmm...a few parts are a bit unrealistic. for instance, harry drops ron a bit too fast and suddenly. and ron acted worse after, sure. his speech on love was a bit unreal too, i guess. you can help who you fall in love with in certain cases. say, if you're already in love or loyal to someone else? people kinda use that logic as an excuse to cheat or make things easy for themselves at times. rather than believing there are loves that last a lifetime, even if the relationship or person doesn't. you stay true, cuz...it's worth it. can't do anything else.
and yes, totally obvious that draco likes harry too. :) after he was comforting him about sirius (and of course harry feels bad. you can't stop, he did love him after all. you should never forget, your past makes you who you are. and everything now will be the past soon enough. does that mean it's not important? but anyway...)
nice fic overall, it was especially funny in the beginning, "i can't help that his hair is so shiny!" lol.