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| Mik 2008-07-21 ch 9, anon. | abusethis is a great reflection of their relationship. the moments they spent together were sporadic, and so are these letters, and you captured one of the things i loved about them--it's the light little bits that bonded them together. having just finished crisis core, zack and aerith's relationship is still in a..sensitive spot, so maybe it's just me, but the ending was very deep and emotional. excellent. |
| Ardwynna Morrigu 2007-12-15 ch 9,  | abuseEven knowing this story has a sad ending on this side of the veil doesn't make it any easier. T_T |
| Ardwynna Morrigu 2007-12-15 ch 3, | abuseIt's adorable, with the sweet affection between them. I like the hints of army life and Cloud snoring! Hi, Mrs. Aerith's mom... so Zack. |
| Jeri16 2007-10-05 ch 9, | abuseomg so sad i really loved this story! |
| ghikiJ 2007-10-01 ch 9, | abuseWow...nice piece! I like the way you made the latter letters sent in a prolonged period of time. The last two letters were heartwrentching, especially when Aerith said that she didn't know where he was and when Zack desperately pleads to Aerith not to let him go. After seeing Crisis Core...I really could see this fic happening, you know. Really good piece, worth reading by any Zerith fans. Great job! |
| Kisara Strife 2007-08-11 ch 9, | abuseBrilliant and Zack´s words ´so far away for far too long´omg- so Nickelback´s ´´Far Away´´!! Sad, but sweet...still fairly sad though, considering we know what happened... BrillianT! |
| Talim-Hime 2007-08-11 ch 9, | abuseWow, this was so sad. The abruptness of it all suits them -- he does kind dissappear forever, at least in her eyes. Good work. |
| Katria 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseShoot Daine (using your fic name here XDD) How do you find the time to write all these? But anyways, I like this letter. Though ignorant I may be, I REALLY think it's cute. |
| Kisara Strife 2007-08-09 ch 7, | abuseAw...so god, i love Zaerith and u really kept them in their charachters aswell... pity he never made it back to Midgar- such a good story! X |
| joiede 2007-08-08 ch 6, | abuseInteresting premise. I really like this fic. You did a fantastic job getting their voices right. Haha, Zack's letters are especially funny-- "He hasn’t been snoring too loudly in recent weeks either. I just zip the sleeping bag up over his head." Heh. I was drinking iced tea when I read that part, and ended up snorting it up my nose. Painful, it is. Nevertheless, keep up the good work! I'm looking forward to the next chapter-- except this time, I'll keep the liquid beverages at bay. :) |
| Talim-Hime 2007-08-06 ch 2, | abuseThis is so cute. I wonder when Aeris will get her last letter. XD Please continue. |