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| Nietono-no-Shana 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseAwh, this was adorable! I love JoexKatie; it's my favorite pair in MM. But yes, you could've made it longer. I liked it though! Short stories (aka. oneshots) are sometimes better than longer ones...*nod nod* Anyways, it was cute! Good job! |
| Momo-chan12 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abuseNyahaha, this was so adoreable! XD You can't resist the sweets...so good!^^ It was such a cute and sweet idea for a story, it was really fun for me to read too!! You should definetly write more fanfics like this, I'd love to read them. This was awesome and I loved it! Great work on this~ |
| Fairy Friend 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseHaha, this was a great story idea! Well-written, VERY funny, and just a creative and cute idea for a story. Job well done! :] |
| The Scarlet Sky 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseShort, sweet, and to the point. But I wouldn't have minded if you had made it longer. XD I'm assuming this is a oneshot. If so, it's going straight into my C2. And BTW, allow anonymous reviews! You'll get more feedback that way. |