Does shameless bumpings work? :)

It was great :) I'm waiting for more chapters!

So far this has been excellent, but you sometimes slip up on tense. Other than that you're doing very well.

This has great potential, but I think it would be more.. readable.. if you set the 'time' right. I don't know how to phrase it, so I'll give an example:

she gave a cute smile which caused Kohta to blush a little. (past tense)

"Is it... is it really you, Yuka?" startled but almost happy to the point of tears. He hasn't(not past tense) seen the cousin closest to him in years and now here she was, (past tense again)

You do it a lot, and it's kind of disturbing..

This is not a flame, because I enjoy the way you write. I just can't get into it with mistakes like these. If you corrected them, this would be so awesome!

Heh heh, this pwns the manga! Update soon please!

Man, you just got yourself a favorite! Congratulations!

that was good. and sorry for not reviewing your other chapters, as the login part was down for a while.

Hmm...this is a pretty interesting fanfic. I really like the fact that you added in Kouta's mother; I always wanted him too at least mention her in the anime. Please update soon! ^^

i like waht your doing with his mother and the little changes also

well i see his family is dead but i like how you changed it up a little

wonder what kind of changes you made, like keeping Kohta's family alive or something

Hell... I know the "come inside" thing applies if the characters speak english, if the japanese term for "this" isn't the same or sounds alike, but you not going to take thing lightly, right?

Good for that in a way: the anime was very "soft" for me after I read the manga.

You could do the "classic groping scene" sexier... do you remember in the manga how she catch Kohta's leg with hers and goes up and down =D?

Please, continue ^^

Man... i hated Mayu's Stepdad before, but now i wanna MURDER him! you'd make my day if you killed him in this! Well as usual a good chapter! Keep up the awesome work and update soon!

FINALLY SOME FANSERVICE! I LOVE YOU! *glomp*

And the had some new things, and the flashbacks too. I llook forward to another chapter, and wacht with the flashbacks: if they tell to much some misteries to intrigue the readers are gone; I hope you can manage to use them well.

What will happen with Mayu? do you have some new ideas for her?

And about the Kouta and Yuka relationship, just follow your heart.

Of course, I can't wait to see that scene where Nyu "ask for it out of blue" to Kouta (you know, when he gropes her).

Well, another great chapter!Loved the Fanservice by the way...hehehe. About the Yuka-Kouta love...If it were up to me, i'd like it to be mutual, but then you're the Author, so whatever you decide it'll be fine i guess. I'd love the Lucy-Nana battle aswell!:)

So keep up the Brilliant work and update soon!