great chapter luv all of the detials and the way u got into Lysergs head. keep rockin!

Brilliantly written. Your fic, in my opinion, is best I've read thus far when it comes to fitting Lysergs' mindset and portraying him.

Nah, everything checks out.

Ah! angst...

I know how you feel when it comes to Lyserg...yes, he's pretty isn't he...Anyways, keep writing!