so where did they go? Edward KNEW she wasn't ready to say yes yet. What did they go do all dressed up so beautifully? You only told half the story! No fair it's like when I tell my kids half of the bed time story and bribe them to stay in bed and go to sleep by telling them that's the only way they can hear the other half tomorrow night! The only difference is I actually do tell them "the rest of the story". Write it please! I know you are the famous and revered silly bella and that I am only a lowly and humble nobody but please could you finish the story? I really like this one!

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GOOD STORY

I like it! Good job about the rules! That was very tricky! I hope you keep writing stuff like this! no..just keep writing!

Wolvesblood15

That was cute.

that's the most romantic thing I've ever read in my entire life. i love it!

Such a hot dress. I love sapphires! They are the best gems! Cute story.

So sweet. Continue.

Ok, that is not very constructive or helpful, but I see that you haven't touched this story in a while. Update, and then I'll critique. :)

LOVE IT!

wow kool update! now!

Nice story! I love it! so sweet.

thanks for writing this. its really good.

hey this was really adorable but, imnot sure if u want to, but u could always make this a longer story like wat happens wen they get bak home or sumthin. its up to u but im justsayin...

you are Such a good writer. love it, so sweet, aw. perfect

Interesting. Update soon hun? :D

Aw, Edward :D What a cutie.