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shibara1310
2008-12-29 . chapter 1
I thought I read this! D: Huh...

It was hilarious, yet somewhat emotional...Okay, yeah, I'm horrible at describing things. XD

But I really enjoyed it~ It was really interesting, and they were both in character. (which is awesome) There's something about it that's just so...different, you know? It's definitely not like anything else I've read (which is good). :D
FlurryDivider
2007-11-01 . chapter 1
Fun story, i strangely got attatched to it. HOLY FUCKBOMBS! XD
fullmetalguitar
2007-08-15 . chapter 1
I saw the summary and I just had to read it. I mean. XD I couldn't stop myself at all. And it was cute while being sad. A bit trippy what with time jumps and a few sentences expressing all that really needed to be said about something. And it was so very Zexion in that way. I was woried about them, but then, Zexion followed him. And it was perfectly not perfect but yeah, pretty perfect. The ending situation I mean. Applause. Thanks. Love.
AutumnRain09
2007-08-14 . chapter 1
Different but cool, I like it.

Thanx,

IcyPirateChic
ButterflyxSoup
2007-08-08 . chapter 1
I liked that. I think that, in spite of the utter crackness of it, you portrayed them rather well. But what really drew me in would be the armadillo guts.
Inspire-Illuminate
2007-08-07 . chapter 1
Awh! That was really cute.

I loved the last little blurb, about how Zexy folows this time. so kawaii!

cookies for you!
(::) (::)
Mousewolf
2007-08-07 . chapter 1
Well...Axel //does// look like a texas speedbump when his hair's all wet...a squished armidillo in can-no-rey. Hehehe.

Hail The Organization! Hail Discordia! *is shot* ...hile malibu on the rocks...whe...
silver moon droplet
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
SQUEE. and fucking nazism! it wouldn't let me see it.

but oh constance that was...SO SEXY.
and funny it made me burst into random
laughter here and there & i NEEDED that.

but oh god--even though this was a drabble
it was amazing. & holyfuckbombs LOLZ.


--cap'n ana
CocoaButter
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
that was absolutely wonderful
xOnexWingedxClonex
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
That was so adorable and AkuZeku is such a rarity-- I absolutely loved it!

Depopulating
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
Ahahahaha, even in Florida, armadillos are known to run around. There was one in a bush in my front yard. From far away in the rays of a flash light, it looked kinda cute. :/

Anyways...this was...actually pretty cute. XD It had a VERY nice flow to it, which I liked, and it was just...awesome. And I don't know why. Maybe the simplicity of it all? XD I dunno.

I love AxelxZexion. Probably because I'm not picky. Give me any mix of my favorite characters, and I'll be happy...

..oh dear, I'm rambling. ^^

Anyways, I loved this!

-DM
Malathyne
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
HAPPY AKUZEKU DAY! =D

Omg AkuZeku ftw. x_x I need to figure out what I'm gonna write for today...
Moogles With Flamethrowers
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
Alright! Texas speedbumps! I've only seen a live one twice, but I've seen so many dead ones in the middle of the road it's not even funny. I'm not an AkuZeku fan, but the story was good!
KuroSakura-chan
2007-08-06 . chapter 1
Aw, that was cute!!
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