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| MelBelle2 2008-03-20 ch 1, | abuseOMG I so needed that laugh. that was so funny. OMG I laughed so hard. Poor Booth. lol Poor Zack. lol Oh wow that was so funny. |
| beaglelvr93 2007-10-28 ch 1, | abuseOH MY GOD I"M DEAD FROM LAUGHING> OH MY GOD! |
| krazegirl 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseSo sorry it took me so long to review! I'm slowly working my way through the 60 odd chapters I need to review and I'm working from the oldest to the newest.But enough of my excuses. I love Hodgin's theory for the murder, the hit and run of the streaker, awesome. And the thought of Hodgins catching Zack streaking in his apartment was great. I knew guys who would steak during college, not at our college but at the women's college nearby. Good times. Oh man, Zack's gonna do it... ha love that Brennan saw the pale white blur. Oh god. Zack ran into Booth! That's so hilarious. "Put that away" hehe, one the pretty new suit too... "tried frantically to cover his modesty with his hands." Hodgins is good. I love that Booth is so disturbed and ha! Brennan has streaked, wow. Jeeze, "the butt naked squints running around the Hoover building" that is something I would pay to see. But only, only, if Booth gets in on the action :) Awesome story, loved it so much! |
| he's a wee little puppet ma... 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abusewell i am not very good at reviews but will give it a shot! I liked this one alot and i honestly wished i would have waited a couple days to read this one. I hurt my ribs couple days ago and let me just say that reading this fic didnt help at all in the pain department, i was laughing so hard i think i hurt something else! The imagery that this story put in my head was brilliant. The way the characters are written is spot on especially the dialogue between Hodgins and Zach!! I can just see Hodgins goading Zach until Zach broke down! A very good story that i know will probably read again soon without the pain from the ribs making me stifle my laughter!! Thanks and I have added this to my favorite list! |
| fanofbones 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseOMG laughing my ** off here...ladies that was wonderful and funny as hell...you two should definitely write until your hearts content...and your loyal fans will be here... My fav part was Booth's expression to Zach...that was worth every word or visual for me... I loved Bren not making a big deal about it we should have another fic about Bren's experience...what do ya think gals?? fab |
| zosohoorah 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseand i just died laughing, good work! I love it! |
| mag31 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseHow the hell did this idea come to your mind?? LOL Well, it made me laugh a lot of course. It was as if I had been there, I could nearly watch Zach doing it. You respected very well each character's personality and usual reaction. Good job! |
| BonesDBchippie 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abusejem~niah, OH YOU GILRS are a HOOT! AND I've missed you TERRIBLY!! That was HYSTERICAL! LOV'D when Zack ran into Booth and it was as if he had COOTIES!!--Oh no he's damaged for LIFE!!hehe! AND Brenn!==Telling Booth she didn't streak down an EMPTY hallway==OH that was priceless!! THEN the guys at the Hoover building! OMG! TOO FUNNY! YUP, this was a GREAT one-shot! ~G :D |
| Addictt 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseOh my God! That was.. so funny and awkward at the same time! I L-O-V-E-D Booth in this little fic. Especially with his eyes covered (I quote: 'Will you please put something on', 'I'm scarred for life'). I also think it's nice how you wrote Hodgins and Zach down. Hodgins actually does have influence in Zachs behaviour, so I think this is well done. Looking forward to another Sunflower Lily Production :-) x Addy |
| Owl Emporium 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseHa ha I LOVED THIS! :D |
| Lifeguard 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseLMAO! Seriously, my family probably thinks I'm insane cause I am sitting up here laughing my butt off (alone, none the less). This story is the funniest thing I've read in a long time! Excellent job! |
| muppetmadness 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseOh. My. God. The mental images. I'm laughing hysterically. |
| PurplePicklesUnite 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseHaha the last line cracked me up! Gotta love Angela! |
| imockyouwithmymonkeypants 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abusethat was really good. it had great humour i couldnt stop laughing at the end when brennan was telling angela. well done to both of you |
| labsquint 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseHa! Loved this story -- very funny with several laugh out loud moments in it for me. I really loved the way that Hodgins talked Zach into the initial streaking. He knew just what to say to get Zach's level of curiosity raised to the extent that he mull it over for a while and then go with it (that was also well done; Zach wouldn't have made a snap decision about it). Best part of the whole story for me: Zach turned the corner and ran straight into Booth-every square inch of his naked skin coming in full contact with Booth's new Armani suit. "What the hell?" Booth stumbled backwards and spun in a circle, covering his eyes with one hand. "Put that away or I swear, this time I really will shoot you." His hand rested on his gun at his hip while Zach turned a bright shade of red and tried frantically to cover his modesty with his hands. Hodgins burst into laughter on the platform and clapped his hands." Love Booth's line in there; I can totally imagine him saying it. And the epilogue section was great. You don't hear from Booth personally, but you get the impression that he's been scarred for life by these two and their highjinks. Well written (as we can only expect from you two), funny, totally in character. Good job! |