Oh... lovely...

Im in love with the idea of never really love anyone (Ok that doest made sense)

ok ok this is one of the most interesting fanfictions i've ever read. it was so complete in EVERYTHING! word usage, staying in character, description, thought process, ending...

just...wow!

and i don't say that lightly.

just everything about this seemed exactly perfect. i luved luved LUVED this!

keep writing!

(ps, most interesting POV i've seen since i read a Heidi POV one)

I think its really good. Very interesting, and from a very different POV...

that was fawesome!

Pretty good oneshot :D

O.o this is awesome...i love it...i like the idea of contimplating WHY Bella was chosen by Edward..i mean even Bella wonders.

I like it. It's sort of like one someone else wrote called Gianna's View, or something similar. I think that you would enjoy reading it.

Personally, your writing is good, and your thoughts well-organised. However, I think you need to ask someone to read it over for you, just to catch some small sentence-structure issues. Well done, though!

its very interesting, i like it lol