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Reviews For: My Third Daughter's First Date - Reviews: Page 1 of 10

Sanna Lan
2008-09-09
ch 5,
abuseBefore the hollow, my thoughts were "OMG, this is too awesome" Specially the movie, it's almost impossible not to sweatdrop at Ichi's thoughts. But then the hollow arrived and I was like "Oh, my. So that was his plan..." I have to read next chapter... *goes read*
Sanna Lan
2008-09-09
ch 4,
abuseROFL This is just too awesome! I can't stop reading (though I should do my homework before my mom goes bankai on me). I loved Chizuru's perfectly planified date and how Ichigo almost goes Hollow on Uryuu. And Shirosaki is my new hero XD Also Kisuke and Isshin with their pretending not to know each other. I just spent the whole time laughing ROFL
shikuridagger
2008-08-02
ch 7,
abuseoh how cute!
i love stories that end having ichigo and rukia as a couple!
ICHIRUKI! teeheehee.

word of advise watch it with the story divider... "page break" sometimes you like use it to much not to mention with unnessary spots too. BUT i love the story!
darkchocol8807
2008-06-28
ch 7,
abuseI LOVE THIS STORY!

I was reading your "heart's desire." (im not done reading it...) and i really liked your writing style so i lookedd up ur other works...

I love this story! despite the fact that it's keeping me from finishing my homework at midnight...

DarkChocol8
Mazaki-chan
2008-04-18
ch 7,
abuseYour story is just so *sigh* it's totally sugoi!
I actually read your 'Sex for Dummies' story first and I loved it soo much I'm actually recomending it to my friends to read! ^-^ May you make more wonderful fanfics in the future!
utility
2008-04-14
ch 7,
abuseAwesome story. Read it all in one go. A big thumbs up and 'score' for you. Also loved the A/N. Just wanted to let you know your efforts are greatly appreciated!
helbaffy
2008-04-08
ch 7,
abuseYhis is a cracker! ahahahah THE BEST FUNNY AND ROMANTIC STORY EVER!
I LOVE IT! :)
helbaffy
2008-04-08
ch 1,
abusehehhehe this is so cool! Great fic! i can't wait to read more! :)
Lazy Mew
2008-04-02
ch 7,
abuseLOL OMGOMGOMG the best IchiRuki humor fic ever!! XD I enjoyed reading it very much...it's one billion thumbs up for you! Great job! Keep it up! :D
liltiffany
2008-03-31
ch 3,
abusethe french part was a killer ahahahaha xD
Inuki
2008-03-05
ch 1,
abuseCute idea. Maybe you can have Isshin get Urahara's help and set Rukia up on various dates with different Shinigami. Of course Ichigo have to spy and be jealous.
Neko.Writer
2008-02-25
ch 5,
abuseoh wat was Kentaro thinking going up against all those blood thirsty characters to save the one he loves.

I love how u make the story of the movie relate to Rukia and Ichigo's story line yet they r oblivious of that fact!
Neko.Writer
2008-02-25
ch 4,
abuseI am so happy that someone else bothers to mention Issin's shinigami past..no one does dat which kinda ** me off and urahara and him make a really funny couple to write about i've done it in my stories!
Neko.Writer
2008-02-25
ch 2,
abusei will not forgive u my spawn of mine. LMFAO Who says spawn? Either way it made the orange juice i'm drinking go all over the floor...damn now i have to clean it up, but it was worth it lol
Snowing Moon
2008-02-23
ch 1,
abuselol bankai? i think u mean kanpai. but anyway, luv ur story, read it about a billion times now. great job!
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