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| Quill-32 2008-02-29 ch 1,  | abuseHee! I can definitely see both of them reacting this way, and I'm glad Sara didn't get over her mad right away. A great post-Natalie fic. |
| In Hiding 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseNice :) |
| angsty-otaku 2007-08-31 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. I like how you wrote the interaction between Sara and Grissom throughout the whole thing. It was very believable. |
| contrarymotion 2007-08-11 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. I can see him completely smothering her like that. And totally get her jello thing...I've had teeth extractions where afterwards that was the only thing I could eat. Aside from yoghurt... Keep writing! |
| gsrshipper 2007-08-10 ch 1, | abuseI would absolutely die of happiness if this is how it plays out! Haha, glad to be back from vacation! :) |
| chiops 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuse"It’s my job to be smarter than the criminals." - Yes, and on the 7th day he rests. It was very nice how you portrayed Grissom's overprotectiveness as guilt of not having caught the killer sooner. Thanks a lot for this story! |
| SammieAtHome 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseYup!Another post ep fic BUT it's a good one!! Write more 'cause we don't mind! |
| Angela Kinetic 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseAngsty fluff? What wizardry is this?! JK, very good. Totally believable; no one has a perfect relationship, very happy with the fact that you didn't get out of character with the fight. ^_^ Kudos to the the 10th power! Just the rigt way to wrap things up too. |
| jtbwriter 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseThis is good-very good! I was wondering what was driving poor Gris...and his guilt was so overwhelming...sigh. The believability of Sara and Grissom's fighting hurt...but the way they found their way back...just right. Thanks for a very engrossing story! |
| gsr4ever 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseI liked this fic. I can totally imagine Grissom being overprotective and blaming himself for what happened to Sara. |
| LouAnn 2007-08-07 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. I definitely could see Grissom being this overprotective. |