that was really sad. i feel like crying now. sob D= but it was a great story and i really understand it. good job on it. -thumbs up-


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Pretty good. As for the mistakes - this is fanficiton, it doesn't always need to follow the timeline! xD
I'd be glad to beta for you though.

i think my keyboard will short-circuit from all the tears flowing. oh my god, that was so sad! a good story, though. keep writng and i'll keep reading.

omg that made me cry at the end, (i always knew sasuke was ganna end up killing himself he so emo! haha jking ^_^) any great job on writing thisi was something new and interesting and damn that Itachi for killing Naruto!and damn Naruto for leaving Sasuke! oh well i guess it can't be helped...anyway keep showing off your writing skills!

OWAI!

This was awesome! soo many emotions and really sad but it was all nicely dome and well put. I LOVE IT! wished you'd made it continous but the end on this one was just perfect. YOU DID A NICE JOB! XD

Really well written XD
I didn't seen any major spelling mistakes, and only a couple of the sentences sound a bit weird :P mainly complications with the whole I/You/He thing.

lol Sasuke died... XD

I Started Crying. It was so emotional I could feel Sasuke's pain. This is definately going to my faves!
Nice job!

omg that was so sad. it made me cry and nothing ever makes me cry. you have a real gift as a writer.