 Cynical-Romantic.x. 2009-06-18 . chapter 1Loved it! Favourited =] |
 Tina 2009-05-11 . chapter 1 Lol. I love it. Cute. |
 TwilightFairy-x 2008-11-02 . chapter 1I really loved this (: It was just so sweet. Plus, I'm really glad that you included all of them... and that you got to know each of them a little xD
What would be really nice if you added a chapter for each them and what they did with the map when the went back to Hogwarts, but thats just an idea lol
Anyway, I've added it to my favourites (:
;; TwilightFairy-x |
 analeigh rhea 2008-07-19 . chapter 1oh i like it. favorites! |
 HungarianWitch22 2008-06-13 . chapter 1Oh, this was really good, great characterisation of the children! I'm curious if you wrote sequels to this on.. |
 The viEns of hIStorY 2008-04-11 . chapter 1Oh that was BRILLIANT, loved it so much, I wouldn't think Harry would be as overprotective as that though, but you never know.. |
 EmeraldEyedDreamer 2008-03-02 . chapter 1That was cute. I love it. They are so their parents. I can just imagine all of it happening. |
 MischiefManaged16 2007-11-27 . chapter 1SO, I just had to read this because of my PenName, but I'm so glad I did. Nice to see a cute, short story about the second generation, and I think you've done a great job characterizing them. Good work! |
 The ONE! 2007-10-09 . chapter 1 This story was just..like..so amazing and stuff! I got chills running down my spine!;) Lots of love from the one who sits beside you in class;) |
 InLoveWithHarry 2007-09-11 . chapter 1Excelent! Loved the way you write.Thereis,however, one tiny,puny little mistake.
"Lily said, widening her emerald eyes at him, looking like the epitome of innocence."
Lily didnt actually inherit Harry's (or Lily,her grandmother's)eyes. Only Albus did.
Apart from that, awesome story! Loved it. |
 Ayana-llama 2007-08-28 . chapter 1Great! An unanswered question finally answered! |
 book-worm9008 2007-08-19 . chapter 1LOL!! they got away with it!! I love it it was fun!! You should write how they took the Cloak too!! =D great story! |
 Lily Louisea 2007-08-12 . chapter 1HahaXD I got REALLY many fun mental pictures in my head! Loved it! |
 pomme2terre 2007-08-08 . chapter 1Wicked story! Love, love, love it! But don't forget 'Beneath your window' cuz i'm hooked on that story! |
 Emmy-loo 2007-08-07 . chapter 1Ha ha, brilliant! Is this just a one-shot? |