Oh nice fic! I especially like the part where Dakin asks hin whether it would really make him happy and Posner admits that it wouldn't, it really describes the nature of Posner's feelings for Dakin... Anyway, the whole piece has a nice feel to it, it's very descriptive and I think you capture the characters' 'voices' well.
I loved the History Boys... not only for its great story and characters, but it helped me be a better history student... as it is my major. Anyways, I liked this, the writing was crisp and not muddled by anything. I loved the characterizations, and this was an excellent one shot.