aks100 you should definelty finish this story, it is quite good. Keep up with the great stories... You should also do more, stories, involving april and jenny...

thank you
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Hey I just read this story its really good. please please keep going...?!

I really like your story...you should update soon!! :D

...Interesting story. 8 people, wow, that's a good few.

This chapter was excellent--the end of it was really stark & amazing--the true sign of war: when your friends & loved ones are victims. Sad..it's good to see some real serious exploration of the first Wizard's War.

Interesting tale, one anachronism; Uptown Girl by Billy Joel was released in 1983.

Very intense chapter! Well done

PETUNIA! EURGH!

Really good job.

lol. james fish

WOW!! Great chapter! I loved it a lot, keep up the awesome work and please try to update again soon! I can't wait to see what happens next!

“Lily, go out with me?” He asked her for what seemed like the billionth time in his life.

“Alright,” She said with a grin. She kissed him again but James pushed her away.

“What?” He asked.

“I said alright,” She said with a smile. James was speechless. He was expecting the answer but it was still a shock when it came, “Don’t look so surprised.

aw so sweet
i liked this chapter...so nice and mush mush!
grt job like always and aww her parents r nice..
i like the cute magic she did...

Very good chapter, loved Lily's play at the beginning. James is such a sweetie.

aw can i just say i wanna cry? the sweetness in that chapter
damn james is so nice and u rite this so well
its very late and im tired yet i still enjoyed it immensly

thnx for an update and cant wait for more

hey anna love, its moi ur inspiration hahaah

lol i wasnt sure if i reviewed this so here i am again after rereading the end of the chappie again
good job and i really like how the relatoinship bet. james and lily is going and how james got worried about lily and how siri asked about hiba...
grt job keep it up :D

I just found this story & devoured all 10 chapters at once. When I do that, I only review after the last chapter I read. This is an excellent story. You do a great job of portraying what the first war must have been like. Can't wait for more...