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Reviews for: A Daughter's Fall
NoshMono
2008-10-26 . chapter 2
It's been a while since you updated this fic and when I got around to reading it today, I actually had to pause for a few seconds to remember everything. Sure, I could have reread the first chapter but then again your stories are quite distinct that recalling them aren't that difficult.

Looking at the path Via is going, I'm interested to see how she would evolve though looking at the title pretty much summed it up. I'm guessing that Titans and ODPM might be in cohorts after all since the timing is a bit close.

An aspect that you might want to explain is how the presence of Coordinators threaten the natural evolution of human beings into Newtypes.

Good chapter as usual, and have a good day!
Akatsuki Leader13
2008-10-20 . chapter 2
Interesting. I love that you have Scirocco in this. He's easily one of my favorite Gundam characters. Just as The O is one of favorite MSs. But one thing, it doesn't seem right that the Jupiter colony that Scirocco is from is an EA colony. As ZAFT seemed to always was a greater control over space. But it's your story. So you can do what you want.

One question, will we see other Titans and Titan mobile suits? Cause some of those suits and characters were pretty awesome and I'd love to see them in this.
ZGMF-x20A
2008-10-19 . chapter 2
An interesting chapter, and some good plot twists. So far, I think you've managed the cross over quite well, which is not such an easy feat. Another solid chapter; keep it up.

-ZGMF
nequam-tenshi
2008-10-19 . chapter 2
you finally updated! such a good chapter! though i hope Via won't be brainwashed by those wanting her to be a pilot, maybe her mom can tell her about her days fighting in the War
ZGMF-x20A
2008-10-14 . chapter 1
Hmm... Interesting triumvirate (Cagalli Athrun Meyrin) This oughta work out into a good storyline.
nequam-tenshi
2008-08-04 . chapter 1
I wish you would update! Your story is extremely well-written!
Please do!
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