Still good dude, but it seems the stress of writing is catching up to you. You're starting to make more mistakes than usual. But its still good.

Hey dude this is getting good...btw I'm thinking of discontinuing my current fanfic and doing a new one where Link and Ganon are friends...yes? no? maybe?

Link needs somebody to love!

Your poem is outstanding! You truly have a talent. You should submit it to a contest, honestly. I can't wait to read the rest of your adventure. TW

Superb. Absolutely wonderful. You're the best author I've ever known

Great chapter! Keep up the good work!

Oh no! What will happen? I can't wait!

I like this chapter too. I hope you put the rest up before I get to the end...

P.S. If you are going to give Link a girl... why not Nayru or Din...?

Ha ha! I like Gin! And the walkthrough thing... brillant!

Another great chapter. Can't wait to read more!

Your getting really good at this...anyway the story was good but you should work on your grammar and spelling...“to the your mission.” doesen't really make sense...other than that it was good.

I just read the first chapter and, so far it's pretty good. I look forward to reading more.

Like i said earlier,:PERFECT please keep it up

Dude That was awesome! Everything was so unexpected. The end was genious, I love how you made them find him guilty. I look forward to chapter 13. Also Have any ideas for chapter 3 of mine.

It tokk me a while but i finally finishe readind chapters 8-10. They were cool. Mines taking longer than expected cause of school I've done about half of chapter 2 and it has a title.