Very cute, but still very in character. You wrote it flawlessly.
Great job!
-Lani

aren't they so cute together? you wrote them absolutely perfect!

this is AMAZING. like, amazing amazing amazing. amazing. amazing. :) amazing. you are so amazing with the detail, the words, the imagery, the emotions, the way you're describing the looks and glances and feelings and, wow, i am blown away, this is amazing. amazing. just the kind of post-finale lit stuff i've been looking for- sweet and sexy but with emotion and feeling and showing how the two really are. :) AMAZING AMAZING

it says just chapter 1 so are you planning on continuing the story? i hope so but if it not, may i plead that you write more post-finale lit stuff, JUST LIKE THIS? because your talent is too good to be sitting doing nothing and it would make my world to read more pieces like this style with the same subject.

AMAZING. bravo. :) great great great work.

Very, very good. I loved this. You're an excellant writer.

really really really good. squeal? or prequeal maybe?

YOU"VE GOTTA WRITE MORE HAPPY FICS! this was effing awseome my god i hope you write more like this can't say how much i love this

I adored this!
It was extremely well written

i wished you wrote more of these not so ansty fics. i love this oneand i hope you countinure to write fics like this one- "Orange Stripped Sheets"!

I love your characterisations...honestly, in a lot of fics you see Jess' development meaning he backs down and says yes in a second but here this is just enough give and take. I adore it!!

I can't believe I didn't read this earlier! Missed it somehow..
Anyway...I loved this...just awesome...was so excited when I found it :D
Your vocabulary...grammar...the flow..everything is just brilliant...I envy you... :)
The characterization of both the characters was perfect..
I am from India...and am glad to see a lot of 'Indian' references in your stories...indian summer..the Gods.. :D makes it more special to me...
Your one-shots are brilliant...I have overused 'brilliant'..but can't think of anything else...
Andd...I am not going to end this without requesting you to post the sequel to Redemption...and of course..keep posting your one-shots too.. :D
Btw...which are your favourite Literati stories on fanfic?

Really very well written, interesting narrative style. Thanks for posting.

This is an amazing one-shot. Very well written.

Lovely as always. I such a big fan of yours, have read all of your GG fics several times, and think your dialogue rings as true as anyone else out there writing, which is the highest compliment. One tiny tiny nitpick -and I'm only saying this because you made my day on your profile by correcting the spelling of Hemingway's name. Can I ask you to do the same for Bukowski? You're fantastic!

OMG THIS WAS GREAT! i love it..please write more non-ansty like this one!

KAren

what are your favorite stories in please add any stories that are your favorite stories list. thanx

Very nice one shot! Original, I might add and good :)