LOL Good Job. It seems pretty funny and you've caught the idea of MMO games. All the random junk going on with the people.

I like this one so far, I hope you update it soon. Is this a cross-over of some sort?

Not too shabby. Good use of humour and what not. The premise doesn't make much sense if you think about it, but if I tell myself that the TB side of things is extreamly AU then it's okay.