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Laesneniel
2008-01-19
ch 4,
abuseHi!! I like this fanfic. It's interesting, very well written, especially when it comes to feelings and situations. You said in a note that Kaiba's blood type is A and that indicates that he's creative. So, what's Jounouchi's blood type and what does that indicate. Please answer when you update. I hope you update soon!:)
Frathworth and Butts
2007-12-16
ch 4,
abuse-Wow, you are a very good writer! ^_^ I really do like all the pent up emotions and feelings (grins) Haha, I can't help it but I sinply adore all the parts in the anime when Jou and Seto is "touching" or are -very- close to each other, like during the DOOM part of the anime when the champion trio are of to the island to defeat the big, bad beast of demise (aka the weird dragon that's going to "destroy the world"(insert insane cackle)) and Seto is walking away, Jou quickly..
*Haha, allways close to his master!! XD
..runs after him and Yugi stays behind, Haha, and you can see that Seto and Jounouchi is walking away with -minimum- space beetwen them! (laughing in glee)

- It was like this close! (shows space with thumb and index finger)/fit of giggles/
* (sweatdrop) Yes, we KNOW! For the effing fifthieth time... (mumbles).. never stops.. (sighs) Insane baka..
- "..."
* "...!"
-Yay! I got coke! (rambling something in swedish) :skipps away to have more coke:
* O_O ?!

/returns with a :gigantic: glass of coke/
-So, I really hope you upload the next chapter soon, I enjoyed reading your fic ^_^
A heap of cookies for your work! /throws cookies at computer/
Have a great day!
*Toodles
-/* Hugs and Kisses!
Ryua Malfoy
2007-11-07
ch 4,
abuseOh, I love the tension between them. It's just delicious!
munchiekins
2007-11-02
ch 4, anon.
abuseI'm too lazy to sign in. I liked this chapter, but only the really last part got me. The majority of it I felt a bit removed from the characters...I think perhaps it's because you tell us how they think without showing us why they think that? O.o? Eh just some advice.

But GAHH Rainy!Scene under the umbrella. DID NOT GO THE WAY I EXPECTED lawl I thought there'd be kissy kissy! :DD

But I like the hand on face thing- so intimate, ne?

Anyway gotta run. LOVE YOU :]
Chibi-the-small
2007-10-31
ch 4,
abuse*__* Yet again this was truly marvelous. Well can’t say much about this chapter expect that I love it! Well can’t wait for next up date keep doing a fabulous job.
dragonlady222
2007-10-29
ch 4,
abuseI loved it. They are both so confused and unsure. Jounouchi made the first step. I hope Kaiba reciprocates. He could probably tutor Jounouchi in science if he knew he needed it. This is great.
dragonlady222
2007-10-29
ch 3,
abuseGood chapter. I guess both boys are dreaming about the other. They are getting closer to each other. I'm so glad that they are not constantly fighting.
dragonlady222
2007-10-28
ch 2,
abuseGood chapter. I wonder what is wrong with Jounouchi. Poor guy. I really like this a lot.
dragonlady222
2007-10-28
ch 1,
abuseI like the start of this. Jounouchi sounds really lonely and vulnerable. I love that you don't make him sound stupid.
iloveatem
2007-10-28
ch 4,
abuse*skips around* Oh! What a fluffy chapter! Just what I needed; I was unknowningly going through KaiJou fluff withdrawl, and you SAVED me! Thank you!
I fell in love with that rain scene. Absolutely stunning. This ff has so much tension, it makes my heart ache! The suspense is killing me!
Bonkotsu! Yay!
-iloveatem-
pennypigeon
2007-10-01
ch 3,
abuselove it, hope you update soon
jaron
2007-09-20
ch 3, anon.
abuseah--! I found the link to this on LJ, and I'm so glad I clicked it!! You're story is so well written, and I can't wait to read more! It's so hard to find high-quality kaijou fics
Touki-sama
2007-09-18
ch 3,
abusewhoah

awesome, can't wait for the next chapter! =]
Tayko
2007-09-11
ch 3,
abuseHI! luv this youd better update soon!! ;)
it feels SO good to be reading ficcies again!

Love Tayko
Chibi-the-small
2007-09-09
ch 3,
abuse>_< this chapter made me feel warm and fuzzy and love the story even more. oh happy day! it was nice and long and the plot thickens i really can't wait for next your update! heres a ton of SetoxJou virtual plushies hope they inspire.
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