hope you decide to finish this someday <3 I was totally loving it.

Oh, man, that was good! O I really like how you wrote the situations and built then up. Very nice. I also like how your writing their characters. Equally nice!

Anyway, I look forward to the next chapter! Update soon, OK? ;3

This story is really getting interesting. I can't put my finger right on it, but I feel that there's some kind of mystery around here. I guess I'll just have to wait for chapter 4.

Hi!! I like this fanfic. It's interesting, very well written, especially when it comes to feelings and situations. You said in a note that Kaiba's blood type is A and that indicates that he's creative. So, what's Jounouchi's blood type and what does that indicate. Please answer when you update. I hope you update soon!:)

-Wow, you are a very good writer! ^_^ I really do like all the pent up emotions and feelings (grins) Haha, I can't help it but I sinply adore all the parts in the anime when Jou and Seto is "touching" or are -very- close to each other, like during the DOOM part of the anime when the champion trio are of to the island to defeat the big, bad beast of demise (aka the weird dragon that's going to "destroy the world"(insert insane cackle)) and Seto is walking away, Jou quickly..
*Haha, allways close to his master!! XD
..runs after him and Yugi stays behind, Haha, and you can see that Seto and Jounouchi is walking away with -minimum- space beetwen them! (laughing in glee)

- It was like this close! (shows space with thumb and index finger)/fit of giggles/
* (sweatdrop) Yes, we KNOW! For the effing fifthieth time... (mumbles).. never stops.. (sighs) Insane baka..
- "..."
* "...!"
-Yay! I got coke! (rambling something in swedish) :skipps away to have more coke:
* O_O ?!

/returns with a :gigantic: glass of coke/
-So, I really hope you upload the next chapter soon, I enjoyed reading your fic ^_^
A heap of cookies for your work! /throws cookies at computer/
Have a great day!
*Toodles
-/* Hugs and Kisses!

Oh, I love the tension between them. It's just delicious!

I'm too lazy to sign in. I liked this chapter, but only the really last part got me. The majority of it I felt a bit removed from the characters...I think perhaps it's because you tell us how they think without showing us why they think that? O.o? Eh just some advice.

But GAHH Rainy!Scene under the umbrella. DID NOT GO THE WAY I EXPECTED lawl I thought there'd be kissy kissy! :DD

But I like the hand on face thing- so intimate, ne?

Anyway gotta run. LOVE YOU :]

*__* Yet again this was truly marvelous. Well can’t say much about this chapter expect that I love it! Well can’t wait for next up date keep doing a fabulous job.

I loved it. They are both so confused and unsure. Jounouchi made the first step. I hope Kaiba reciprocates. He could probably tutor Jounouchi in science if he knew he needed it. This is great.

Good chapter. I guess both boys are dreaming about the other. They are getting closer to each other. I'm so glad that they are not constantly fighting.

Good chapter. I wonder what is wrong with Jounouchi. Poor guy. I really like this a lot.

I like the start of this. Jounouchi sounds really lonely and vulnerable. I love that you don't make him sound stupid.

*skips around* Oh! What a fluffy chapter! Just what I needed; I was unknowningly going through KaiJou fluff withdrawl, and you SAVED me! Thank you!
I fell in love with that rain scene. Absolutely stunning. This ff has so much tension, it makes my heart ache! The suspense is killing me!
Bonkotsu! Yay!
-iloveatem-

love it, hope you update soon

ah--! I found the link to this on LJ, and I'm so glad I clicked it!! You're story is so well written, and I can't wait to read more! It's so hard to find high-quality kaijou fics