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| yayme2012 2008-01-21 ch 1, | abuseQuite honestly, I loved it. I'm glad your skill carries over into other categories! |
| vampireprincess1606 2007-12-08 ch 1, | abusegreat job on your first HP Fanfic!! And, may I say, I loved it! U have a funny sense of humor. But, alas, so do I but I dont show it in my writing. great job once again... hiss vampireprincess1606 |
| Purple Punk Pirate 2007-08-24 ch 1, | abuseYou did a great job XD Love it, wich is almost always the case when I review, but that is besides the point XD |
| ibelieveinsnorkacks 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseCute, it was really good :D |
| brios 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseVery well written! I congrat you. I can't believe you're only 14, this was very well written. I'm a college professor and I've graded written papers that makes you want to puke, they're so badly written by college age students. Keep up the really good work, and I'll be reading your longer story when you finally upload it. :) |
| QtipKiwis 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseFluffy goodness. You stayed cannon though. Your first one is a hit. Keep writing some more! |
| freak a geek 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abuseLol. Omg! That was so cute! I loved it! And not too shabby might I say with the first time going. LOL! It would be freaking hilarious/totally amazing/jaw dropping if a half naked Harry Potter/Daniel Radcliffe walk to your kitchen. -rubs hands evilly and plots- Now, if only we had a dimensional transporter to send the really gorgeous charcters (cough Edward cough Harry) into our world, then it would all be good. Have you read Eclipse yet? OMG! It was confuzzling and making me somewhat irritated but I read it again and it was good. But...I have to say this. I went to the somewhat little darkside. I am no longer in love with Edwardo del Hotto. I am more liking Jasper...because he didn't pee me off. ^^. Anyways! Sorry if that makes you concerned and you want to disabandon me forever. I'll understand. Now. Don't confuse my long e-mail with someone else's long e-mail! Lol. Anyways! Toodles! Love Micah the Now Jasper Hale fan...I'm sorry. Lol. |
| fanficfan1037 2007-08-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseCool! I've never read Twilight but this story was **' ! Please update a.s.a.p.! |
| Dueler312 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseThis one was actually really funny. Keep it up! |
| Yumi Stern 2007-08-08 ch 1, | abuseI really thought this one was cute. Your longer story will probably be great because you are very descriptive in your writing. |