please update soon! I love it and can't wait to read more!

please write more i think the story is going to be great write soon :)

ok, so this is the sweetest thing...EVER. i reall, really liked it and btw your "voice" is awsome. and plz just let them at eachother already. the tension between them is hilarious!

I love this so far, Please update soon!

Is there going to be another one?

I liked it, you might want to move it to Night World though.

~KaylaMarie2012~

SOunds awesome!! Can't wait for more!!

this is a good story but i think you need more descriptions as well as the dialouge

very good i really like it add more when you can!

Love it, it's absolutely wicked!

*Laughs*

x QoS x

*Tinkling laugh*

Good, good.

Please update soon

x QoS x

hmm...

quite gud! keep it up, n plz update soon!

I can't wait to see the two of them together!

It was good, although I liked Ash's pov more.

I'm interested.